墨望山 童生
Joined: 12 Feb 2007 Posts: 25
墨望山Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-07 06:08:30 Post subject: 清平乐 后山送友别 |
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清平乐 后山送友别
文-胡默
风长月远
古道寒菊乱
更见西山孤飞燕
长亭马蹄声慢
曾记年少轻狂
挽弓欲射天狼
转眼风霜满面
白头遥叹周郎
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-07 07:48:44 Post subject: |
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婉约词风!
問好墨望山! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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墨望山 童生
Joined: 12 Feb 2007 Posts: 25
墨望山Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-07 19:30:44 Post subject: |
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| 呵呵,问好闲人,在下词拙句糙,多多指教。 |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-08 19:53:42 Post subject: |
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上阙送友人,下阙赞友人。可见情深意长。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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