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关于那些雪一样的盐巴
黎阳
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PostPosted: 2007-03-17 06:15:19    Post subject: 关于那些雪一样的盐巴 Reply with quote

关于那些雪一样的盐巴

透过海水,我用心情仰望
那些饱含着苦涩的 坚挺
是一些被阳光沉淀下来的雪
颗粒 颗粒 颗粒 最后记忆还是颗粒

穿越净化的田埂 足迹
那些旋转的输送带上
岁月被打散成一个个独立的日子
被渴望堆积成雪山一样的往事



汗水中能够兼容的一滴雪
我们心灵最重的一滴
沸腾或者升华 阳光下笔直的脊背
那些铁骨中燃烧的雪

那些造雪的人 那些爱雪的人
那些和雪一样融化在骨血中的温情
在目光的高温中缓慢的释放
一个季节


我们无法恢复自己成为雪中的一个颗粒
我们是雪 却无法成为雪
因为雪成为一种痕迹
或者说一种履历

背靠大雪的山 我们没有感觉到寒冷
只有一种熟悉的味道 在心灵中环绕
雪是田,雪也是园

用近视的距离 抚摩
我们体内那种涌动的雪

2007-3-18
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-03-17 18:02:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏。
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沙漠
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PostPosted: 2007-03-17 20:51:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

想到晒盐工和那一片白晃晃的盐田!喜欢这一首!
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-03-18 01:21:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

厚重~欣赏!
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黎阳
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PostPosted: 2008-05-25 20:18:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,谢谢各位,好久不来.感谢
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2008-05-25 21:45:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首诗太沉重了,我感觉心底有无法承受的压力.
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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