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雪花 飞扬在松花江大桥
黎阳
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PostPosted: 2007-03-16 05:21:46    Post subject: 雪花 飞扬在松花江大桥 Reply with quote

雪花 飞扬在松花江大桥

遍地的无根玫瑰 开放在哈尔滨的街头
5元一支 廉价 优惠的爱情 能有多少色彩
我从没有雪花的季节归来
期待阳光深处 ,那些刺痛眼眸的雪光

风滚滚的吹动 松开的风纪扣
数码相机中 无言伫立的松花江大桥
铁轨 弥漫的雪花 以及冷漠在路边的雪堆
孩子般堆砌雪人的女人 木然无味的孩子

肯德基里期待着约会的少女 玫瑰真的只是玫瑰
即使是没有情人的情人节 等待也是一种快乐
我努力的去尝试吃光面前的午餐
努力去在风雪中一直往前走 努力不去回头观望
月色 酒杯 无声的笑

车次注定在固定的时刻出发
任何追求与结果通常是背道而驰
在路上风光无限的成为记忆
或许那些过客更容易把握 瞬间


福鑫宾馆的单床上 烟头和书刊
随意的倾斜在箱子上和桌子上
2007年的第一场雪
2007年的情人节

2月14日 松花江的大桥下
有些人在笑,有些人在奔跑
有些人一会就要离开
有些人永远的要离开

2007年2月14日哈尔滨
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-03-16 05:41:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的诗
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黎阳
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PostPosted: 2007-03-17 06:02:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢哥哥,还是批评的好
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鲁绪刚
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PostPosted: 2007-03-18 22:00:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

写的大气,开阔,语言很有个性,问好!
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