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進化與頓悟
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PostPosted: 2010-07-29 10:12:04    Post subject: 進化與頓悟 Reply with quote

進化與頓悟


(貓有九種,十種
九十九種玩球的方式
每一個方式就是一個球
我的三萬六千個毛細孔
撐開的帆布球在滾動)
 
她離開我的身體時
球自九層塔陽台落下

喵:"對不起喔"
她並不丟臉(去撿)

底下一種前所未有的聲音
反彈,越過這一層樓


Evo
 lution
&
 Lightening


(a cat has nine,
ten, ninety nine balls
I have thirty six thousand pores
the ball goes around
in the space-time fabric)

as she was leaving
the ball fell off
the veranda

oh, I am sorry
meowed
she

an emotion never existed
then bounced
up from under my skin

I name it evo-motion #1
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 12:49:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

Avantgarde. A small qualm: in this stanza

an emotion never existed
then bounced
up from under my skin


what bounced up? an emotion (reading from the sentence structure)?
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