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君子爱莲
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Posted: 2007-02-24 22:32:17 Post subject: [原创] 无题

《无题》这个浓雾，华尔兹般旋转的一天我惊讶你的多变。晴朗和阴郁都让玫瑰花自己去瓜分听见你喊我，从虚无中轻轻地喊出来，然后消失在白雾里。天边有暴风雪来临前的迹象我穿上棉衣，戴好帽子和手套在一棵树的野外磨蹭，佯装无意等你，再次唤我，铺天盖地我没有留意到梅枝，什么时候折了或者已被你给了远方。我的想念不要手杖，它也会走得很远、很远直到，我们的岁月落荒而逃

沙漠
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Posted: 2007-02-25 05:35:18 Post subject:

我的想念不要手杖，它也会走得很远、很远直到，我们的岁月落荒而逃特有味！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-02-25 07:16:10 Post subject:

思念的表现形式千变万化 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-02-25 17:32:38 Post subject:

哈, 莲花教的诗歌别有韵味. 喜欢

君子爱莲
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Posted: 2007-02-28 23:11:50 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

我的想念
不要手杖，它也会走得很远、很远
直到，我们的岁月落荒而逃

特有味！

谢谢沙漠，这也是我最钟爱的几句，常常朗诵到这里会不知不觉地流泪，请多指点！问好！

君子爱莲
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Posted: 2007-02-28 23:16:25 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

思念的表现形式
千变万化

是的，思念的表现形式千变万化，思念的苦痛万变不离其中。问好hepingdao！

君子爱莲
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Posted: 2007-02-28 23:18:52 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哈, 莲花教的诗歌别有韵味. 喜欢

哈哈，一个说莲花会，一个说莲花教，看来真有个什么教什么会的了，哈，谢谢喜欢，问好白水Moonlight！

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Posted: 2007-03-01 04:16:40 Post subject:

这个浓雾，华尔兹般旋转的一天我惊讶你的多变。晴朗和阴郁都让玫瑰花自己去瓜分写的洁静，自然。问好！ _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

君子爱莲
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Posted: 2007-03-08 19:44:06 Post subject:

了因大兄 wrote:

这个浓雾，华尔兹般旋转的一天
我惊讶你的多变。晴朗和阴郁
都让玫瑰花自己去瓜分

写的洁静，自然。
问好！

哈哈，谢谢了因大兄，请多指点哦。问好！

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