非马 秀才
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Posted: 2010-04-25 11:24:46 Post subject: A BELATED DIRGE |
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A BELATED DIRGE
-- for the students perished in recent earthquakes
we should have sung the dirge for you
when they put down the shaky foundation
propped up shoddy beams
and whitewashed cruddy walls
Yet we all kept silence
waited for the earthquake to strike
burying you alive
now all we can do is wail
and sing a belated dirge _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界>
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Lake 举人

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Posted: 2010-04-26 07:42:34 Post subject: |
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As always, thought provoking read.
Lake _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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戴玨 秀才

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Posted: 2010-04-27 07:15:05 Post subject: |
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感覺去掉cowardly效果會更好。 _________________ I labour by singing light
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非马 秀才
Joined: 22 Jun 2006 Posts: 907 Location: 芝加哥 非马Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-27 07:19:22 Post subject: |
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戴玨 wrote: |
感覺去掉cowardly效果會更好。 |
I think you are right. Using "cowardly" might be too telling. Thanks! _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界>
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戴玨 秀才

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Posted: 2010-04-27 07:24:21 Post subject: |
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其實不僅是怯懦,也可以是冷漠、麻木,如此種種。 _________________ I labour by singing light
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