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追日

戴玨
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Posted: 2010-01-27 16:48:26 Post subject: 追日

不久以前，我也曾这样对你直视，那是透过影影绰绰的楼群；此刻我与你之间，只隔了一层玻璃和前方一段不很长的海岸线。你又大又圆，脸色橙红，傍着岸边的山丘，对着大海哼唱。这双层巴士的引擎声真是令人心烦！我只能默默看着你金色的声线随波浪流转。原来竟是很曲折的海岸线令你的面容时隐时现，最终隐入山丘后方，只留下水天交接处的一片袅袅余音... 你回家了，我的一天却开始不久；当我凭幻想解渴，借灯光和诗篇驱散内心的阴影，你又在为谁歌唱？ _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2010-01-27 19:16:55 Post subject:

很美的画面，描述够细。问好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-01-27 20:13:07 Post subject:

一片瞬息的时光和感叹 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

戴玨
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Posted: 2010-01-31 11:59:23 Post subject:

謝二位閱讀！ _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

白水
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Posted: 2010-01-31 17:13:31 Post subject:

你回家了，我的一天却开始不久；看来是个夜猫子，晚上不睡觉，问好

博弈
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Posted: 2010-02-02 15:20:29 Post subject:

双层巴士? 香港? _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

戴玨
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Posted: 2010-02-05 00:32:12 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

你回家了，
我的一天却开始不久；

看来是个夜猫子，晚上不睡觉，问好Very Happy

我長期上晚班的。

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戴玨
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Posted: 2010-02-05 00:33:27 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

双层巴士?

香港?

沒錯。
并非英國。
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Lake
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Posted: 2010-02-05 08:38:57 Post subject:

I like the scene and the mood in this poem. Cheers, Lake _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

上城
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Posted: 2010-02-05 13:12:58 Post subject:

香港的天气一直倒不错。问好 Cheers,too shangcheng _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2010-02-05 22:00:49 Post subject:

当我凭幻想解渴，借灯光和诗篇驱散内心的阴影，你又在为谁歌唱？找到答案了吗？？问好！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

根瑶
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Posted: 2010-02-05 23:10:51 Post subject:

意境美！问好！

上城
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Posted: 2010-02-08 04:10:05 Post subject:

It's a fight beteen day and night.I think.I see. _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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