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				|  发表于: 2007-02-27 07:40:27    发表主题: 五.Chimney |   |  
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				| 5.  煙囪 
 冬日的烏鴉
 的清晨的
 光
 /
 遊離 視線
 視線
 視線
 向松樹間的 葉 縫外換氣
 風來滅頂
 松針
 雨、雨、雨、雨
 下
 
 呼  喊
 向誰
 呼
 呼喊
 
 光的迷離
 一陣
 痛
 騙著
 喉結
 而滑
 落
 
 吞下
 烏鴉的叫聲
 告別
 仍沉睡的世
 黑夜拾起往日幽綠後
 的金黃 前生的露乾
 
 向寸日依靠
 海岸之後的
 浮游孢有沒有家
 雨的後面 有沒有天空
 樹的後面 有沒有彩虹
 一線光
 /
 的後面有沒有什麼
 有沒有
 什麼
 
 
 五.Chimney
 
 Raven
 In winter
 Morning
 Ray
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 Roaming  line
 Of
 Sight
 Beathe through Pine unwilting leaves
 Comes the wind
 Needles
 R a i n  d r o p
 S
 Cry (drowned) out
 To Whom
 Cry
 Help
 Swallow
 Her calling
 Farewell
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 The world yet in sleep
 The twilight hue picks up golden
 After blued green, raisin’ed dews of pre-existence
 Inching on the sun
 Behind the Submergent coastlines
 The spore nomad
 Wandering—is there a home
 Wondering—is there a rainbow
 A drop of ray
 /
 Anything behind or beyond it
 Is there
 Any
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 (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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		| kokho 进士出身
 
  
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				|  发表于: 2007-02-28 01:03:40    发表主题: |   |  
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				| The graphical layout of the text depicted a raven. 
 But the poetic technique and expression by
 means of imagery manipulation is really advanced...
 
 
     
 Cry (drowned) out
 To Whom
 Cry
 Help
 Swallow
 Her calling
 Farewell
 
 ...
 
 Wandering—is there a home
 Wondering—is there a rainbow
 A drop of ray
 /
 Anything behind or beyond it
 Is there
 Any
 
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 乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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