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恍惚
萨福
童生


Joined: 07 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-02-24 04:58:14    Post subject: 恍惚 Reply with quote

猩红色的醉
掉入酒杯
只轻轻一瞥
柳树便摇曳多姿了

是的,桃花还没有开
谁用烟花三月
涂抹出我桃红色眼影
桃红色唇

而那些光
已经像雪花纷堕
痒痒的,在胳肢窝
脚心,手心

你乜着眼笑了
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杯中冲浪
进士出身


Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-02-24 06:14:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

浮在表面。
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hepingdao
Site Admin


Joined: 25 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-02-24 14:59:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

而那些光
已经像雪花纷堕
痒痒的,在胳肢窝
脚心,手心

有情趣
Very Happy
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-02-24 18:14:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

生动, 情趣
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了因大兄
秀才


Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 209

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PostPosted: 2007-03-01 04:29:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

你好!小妹

这最后一句可不要,多余。

“你乜着眼笑了”
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不能随随便便不回家
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