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凭着夜色阑珊
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PostPosted: 2009-08-14 17:03:49    Post subject: 凭着夜色阑珊 Reply with quote

没有人可以告诉我,月亮为什么在我的世界之外,花朵为什么总在我到来之前凋谢。愈是漆黑的夜晚,我的孤独愈深,我的思念愈加放纵。

凭着夜色阑珊,我一个人行走在寂寞的风景里。斑驳陆离的霓虹映照着我的疲惫,我的醉意,我的伤,法国梧桐的落叶越过了我的额头,我的思想,我的归所。

我将像露水一样存在,消逝,然后与月亮无关,没有告别。

我将更加深情,为你哭泣,为我自己而静默,然后等待明天,一切都已经忘却。

凭着夜色阑珊,与自己同在,绝不触及你的心跳。就一杯一杯把青春喝干了,让时间的火焰把我化成灰烬,把我的梦抛向虚无。

或许,唯有如此,你才不再遥远,你才贴近了我滚烫的胸膛。
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米运刚
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PostPosted: 2009-08-15 02:49:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

“凭着夜色阑珊”,你可以更积极乐观一些,你的“青春”“火焰”,可以点燃整个世界。问好!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-08-23 12:05:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

凄美,感人
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PostPosted: 2009-08-23 20:15:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

或许,唯有如此,你才不再遥远,你才贴近了我滚烫的胸膛。
问好!
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谷雨
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PostPosted: 2009-09-07 02:18:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

我将更加深情,为你哭泣,为我自己而静默,然后等待明天,一切都已经忘却。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-07 22:19:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

凝练,深沉,感觉过于伤感。问好
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