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白水
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Posted: 2009-07-19 16:34:25 Post subject: 蓝莓之约（外一首）

蓝莓之约蓝莓之约，约在午后酸酸甜甜的尝试你不说，我也不说声带的颤动止于舌尖一生一世的滋味尽在你我莞尔一笑蓝莓如眸，如白桦树木讷的眼睛销魂之魅魅在相约无声（6．27．2009）都市游鱼行人在车里车在楼群里乡思在姐姐的故事里你在我的诗歌里折弯一勾明月从心海钓一条山野的鱼儿在流光溢彩的街面上活蹦乱跳

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-07-19 17:07:25 Post subject:

余韵无穷。。。

沙漠
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Posted: 2009-07-19 21:28:59 Post subject:

鲜活！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

nobody
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Posted: 2009-07-19 23:29:59 Post subject:

吾过了二十就平平淡淡了。看你酸酸甜甜到几十 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

赵福治
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Posted: 2009-07-20 05:30:55 Post subject:

声带的颤动止于舌尖一生一世的滋味尽在你我莞尔一笑 ....更喜欢第一首.问好姐.

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Posted: 2009-07-20 07:44:04 Post subject:

妹有蓝莓如魅，怕是山鬼的眼眸。那木讷的眼睛怎不会是是妹的情郎，故意，瞎读。蓝莓解毒，极好的野果。这里正热卖，一磅2.99美元，哈哈。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2009-07-20 10:50:16 Post subject:

不错啊。问候白水兄。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-07-20 15:00:30 Post subject:

一生一世的滋味尽在你我莞尔一笑言有尽而意未穷。一瞥了得、一笑了得--- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2009-07-20 16:39:50 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

余韵无穷。。。

谢谢

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-20 16:41:21 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

鲜活！

谢谢鼓励，问好沙漠。

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-20 16:55:32 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

吾过了二十就平平淡淡了。
看你酸酸甜甜到几十 Very Happy

哈，没人，人生的滋味当伴终身，无处可躲。悟者不言已是修炼的炉火纯青了，索性不悟，定是如入无人之境。这神仙过的日子，我羡慕之极却始终未能得之。看来需要继续修炼 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-20 16:57:24 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

声带的颤动止于舌尖
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问好福治

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-20 17:03:24 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

妹有蓝莓如魅，怕是山鬼的眼眸。
那木讷的眼睛怎不会是是妹的情郎，故意，瞎读。

蓝莓解毒，极好的野果。
这里正热卖，一磅2.99美元，哈哈。
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答博士，路透社小道消息：那木讷的眼睛是我先生的“独钟" Wink

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-20 17:03:54 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

不错啊。问候白水兄。

问好海军。

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-20 17:06:17 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

一生一世的滋味
尽在你我莞尔一笑

言有尽而意未穷。
一瞥了得、一笑了得---
_________________
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谢谢理解，问好少君

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-07-22 02:48:59 Post subject:

城市压抑下逸出的细微情思。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-07-22 05:49:47 Post subject:

白水兄，拜读新作，深知含义，即和上一首终于在扣寻了一百五十棵树后您找到了蓝莓与白桦还有那一池秋水倒影着蓝天和白云等待着候鸟的光临人生苦短浪迹天涯的滋味尽在不言中

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-07-22 06:12:17 Post subject:

白桦之恋，蓝莓之约。秋水一池，谱写情歌。

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-22 16:28:13 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

城市压抑下逸出的细微情思。

谢谢理解，问好道模

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-22 17:23:39 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

白水兄，拜读新作，深知含义，即和上一首 Laughing

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秋叶，谢谢和诗。收藏了 Very Happy

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