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PostPosted: 2009-07-19 16:34:25    Post subject: 蓝莓之约(外一首) Reply with quote

蓝莓之约

蓝莓之约, 约在午后
酸酸甜甜的尝试
你不说,我也不说
声带的颤动止于舌尖
一生一世的滋味
尽在你我莞尔一笑
蓝莓如眸,如白桦树木讷的眼睛
销魂之魅
魅在相约无声
(6.27.2009)

都市游鱼

行人在车里
车在楼群里
乡思在姐姐的故事里
你在我的诗歌里
折弯一勾明月
从心海钓一条山野的鱼儿
在流光溢彩的街面上
活蹦乱跳
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PostPosted: 2009-07-19 17:07:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

余韵无穷。。。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-19 21:28:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

鲜活!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-19 23:29:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

吾过了二十就平平淡淡了。
看你酸酸甜甜到几十 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 05:30:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

声带的颤动止于舌尖
一生一世的滋味
尽在你我莞尔一笑
....更喜欢第一首.问好姐.
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 07:44:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

妹有蓝莓如魅,怕是山鬼的眼眸。
那木讷的眼睛怎不会是是妹的情郎,故意,瞎读。

蓝莓解毒,极好的野果。
这里正热卖,一磅2.99美元, 哈哈。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 10:50:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错啊。问候白水兄。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 15:00:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

一生一世的滋味
尽在你我莞尔一笑


言有尽而意未穷。
一瞥了得、一笑了得---
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 16:39:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
余韵无穷。。。


谢谢 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 16:41:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠 wrote:
鲜活!


谢谢鼓励,问好沙漠。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 16:55:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
吾过了二十就平平淡淡了。
看你酸酸甜甜到几十 Very Happy


哈,没人,人生的滋味当伴终身,无处可躲。悟者不言已是修炼的炉火纯青了,索性不悟,定是如入无人之境。这神仙过的日子,我羡慕之极却始终未能得之。看来需要继续修炼 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 16:57:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
声带的颤动止于舌尖
...


问好福治
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 17:03:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
妹有蓝莓如魅,怕是山鬼的眼眸。
那木讷的眼睛怎不会是是妹的情郎,故意,瞎读。

蓝莓解毒,极好的野果。
这里正热卖,一磅2.99美元, 哈哈。
...


答博士,路透社小道消息:那木讷的眼睛是我先生的“独钟" Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 17:03:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
不错啊。问候白水兄。


问好海军。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 17:06:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
一生一世的滋味
尽在你我莞尔一笑


言有尽而意未穷。
一瞥了得、一笑了得---
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谢谢理解,问好少君
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PostPosted: 2009-07-22 02:48:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

城市压抑下逸出的细微情思。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-22 05:49:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水兄,拜读新作,深知含义,即和上一首 Laughing


终于
在扣寻了一百五十棵树后
您找到了
蓝莓与白桦

还有
那一池秋水
倒影着蓝天和白云
等待着
候鸟的光临

人生苦短
浪迹天涯的滋味
尽在不言中
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PostPosted: 2009-07-22 06:12:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

白桦之恋,蓝莓之约。秋水一池,谱写情歌。 Laughing Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-07-22 16:28:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
城市压抑下逸出的细微情思。


谢谢理解,问好道模
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PostPosted: 2009-07-22 17:23:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
白水兄,拜读新作,深知含义,即和上一首 Laughing
...


秋叶,谢谢和诗。收藏了 Very Happy
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