连南河 秀才
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Toronto Journal
The lake shore of the great lake of Ontario
Year-by-year smoothly moving of Toronto
Searching for a TV on Queen Street to continue
Chinatown watching China in Spadina Avenue
Yonge Street who can count with your fingers long how University of Toronto I also try that is bending the bow
The cultural geograghy more and more to read a landscape The realms of buildings are standing up cityscape
Feb 29, 2008 Hormish Garden of Toronto 9:30-9:40 pm _________________ 一路雨丝一路风 |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
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后面有长句啊。读赏,问好! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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连南河 秀才
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Thanks.
Happy Chines New Year!
后面的长句不知为什么无法编辑 _________________ 一路雨丝一路风 |
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Lake 举人

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发表于: 2011-02-06 06:44:14 发表主题: |
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Toronto Journal
The lake shore of the great lake of Ontario
Year-by-year smoothly moving of Toronto
Searching for a TV on Queen Street to continue
Chinatown watching China in Spadina Avenue
Yonge Street who can count with your fingers long how
University of Toronto I also try that is bending the bow
The cultural geograghy more and more to read a landscape
The realms of buildings are standing up cityscape
(Edited the form. Is this how you want it to look like?) _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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连南河 秀才
注册时间: 2008-08-30 帖子: 342 来自: Toronto 连南河北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2011-02-20 08:06:45 发表主题: |
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Thank you, Lake, is it the Lake Ontario
(Feeling from the edited option of the post where is out of work about some poem lines)
I try so many times again again
That edited option is out of work
I don't know why, is it need to maintain
JOURNALS should be awaiting then rework
Thank you, Lake, is it the Lake Ontario
Thing is very very interest for me
A river goes around at scarborough
Along the river, a garden you see
Imagine lots of gulls on Peace Island
The moonlight with the full moon to seas
Homesickness of feelings with motherland
Meeting place waiting for guys overseas
Truly people all understand which I need
We come and create new journey we need
Feb. 17,2011,Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院) _________________ 一路雨丝一路风 |
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