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帖子发表于: 2010-12-24 09:45:00    发表主题: Toronto Journal 引用并回复

Toronto Journal

The lake shore of the great lake of Ontario
Year-by-year smoothly moving of Toronto

Searching for a TV on Queen Street to continue
Chinatown watching China in Spadina Avenue

Yonge Street who can count with your fingers long how University of Toronto I also try that is bending the bow

The cultural geograghy more and more to read a landscape The realms of buildings are standing up cityscape

Feb 29, 2008 Hormish Garden of Toronto 9:30-9:40 pm
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帖子发表于: 2011-01-04 17:39:54    发表主题: 引用并回复

后面有长句啊。读赏,问好!
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帖子发表于: 2011-02-06 06:31:32    发表主题: 引用并回复

Thanks.

Happy Chines New Year!

后面的长句不知为什么无法编辑
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Toronto Journal

The lake shore of the great lake of Ontario
Year-by-year smoothly moving of Toronto

Searching for a TV on Queen Street to continue
Chinatown watching China in Spadina Avenue

Yonge Street who can count with your fingers long how
University of Toronto I also try that is bending the bow

The cultural geograghy more and more to read a landscape
The realms of buildings are standing up cityscape


(Edited the form. Is this how you want it to look like?)
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帖子发表于: 2011-02-20 08:06:45    发表主题: 引用并回复

Thank you, Lake, is it the Lake Ontario

(Feeling from the edited option of the post where is out of work about some poem lines)

I try so many times again again
That edited option is out of work
I don't know why, is it need to maintain
JOURNALS should be awaiting then rework

Thank you, Lake, is it the Lake Ontario
Thing is very very interest for me
A river goes around at scarborough
Along the river, a garden you see

Imagine lots of gulls on Peace Island
The moonlight with the full moon to seas
Homesickness of feelings with motherland
Meeting place waiting for guys overseas

Truly people all understand which I need
We come and create new journey we need


Feb. 17,2011,Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)
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