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霜天晓角—愁

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莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-21 14:22:24 Post subject: 霜天晓角—愁

风来弄月，夜寂伤箫咽。杯尽醉神春去，提幽句、诗成别。牡丹残笑靥，愁思浓厚也。抛泪苦心忧聚，身似旅、花如蝶。

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Posted: 2009-05-21 15:27:02 Post subject:

mm莫愁，有白水兄在，要不要我帮你把神春拉住

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-21 15:42:34 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

mm莫愁，有白水兄在，要不要我帮你把神春拉住 Very Happy

嘻嘻，偶一猜白水“兄”就是第一个评帖子的，你忘了吗？丢丢小调皮曾经让白水姐姐使劲想她，偶也如法炮制，让白水姐姐...

就是没放在标题上

偶躲起来喽！

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Posted: 2009-05-21 17:42:59 Post subject:

白水兄很仗义。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-05-22 05:11:09 Post subject:

霜天晓角漫浓愁, 夜寂伤箫句句幽. 万物长宜舒眼量, 随缘顺遇渡春秋. 问好莹雪! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-22 10:59:36 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

mm莫愁，有白水兄在，要不要我帮你把神春拉住 Very Happy

嘻嘻，偶一猜白水“兄”就是第一个评帖子的，你忘了吗？丢丢小调皮曾经让白水姐姐使劲想她，偶也如法炮制，让白水姐姐...

就是没放在标题上

偶躲起来喽！

你们这群坏丫头, GG 再也不想你们了 Wink

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-22 17:19:28 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

霜天晓角漫浓愁,
...

霜天晓角偶感愁，
赋韵词章笔墨幽。
万物随时应换样，
千年弹指便春秋。

提前祝白云端午快乐！

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-22 17:29:48 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

mm莫愁，有白水兄在，要不要我帮你把神春拉住 Very Happy

嘻嘻，偶一猜白水“兄”就是第一个评帖子的，你忘了吗？丢丢小调皮曾经让白水姐姐使劲想她，偶也如法炮制，让白水姐姐...

就是没放在标题上

偶躲起来喽！

你们这群坏丫头, GG 再也不想你们了 Wink

GG你好好看看哈！是不是丫头？

既然白水GG是GG，我也就正式宣布，从今儿起，比莹雪大的叫莹雪DD，小的就叫莹雪为GG吧！ Wink

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Posted: 2009-05-23 02:16:41 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

mm莫愁，有白水兄在，要不要我帮你把神春拉住 Very Happy

嘻嘻，偶一猜白水“兄”就是第一个评帖子的，你忘了吗？丢丢小调皮曾经让白水姐姐使劲想她，偶也如法炮制，让白水姐姐...

就是没放在标题上

偶躲起来喽！

你们这群坏丫头, GG 再也不想你们了 Wink

GG你好好看看哈！是不是丫头？
...

莹雪MM，数年前，多伦多诗友初见白水诗时未谋其面，拍案惊叹，误为须眉豪杰之大作，故呼其“白水兄”。延用称呼至今。犹如李清照赵明诚故事一段佳话山寨版。 Laughing

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-23 13:42:06 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

哦，还有典故呀！qinghongGG这么一说才明了 Wink

认识水姐姐以来，开始不知道她的性别，只是按我以往在一个论坛时的惯例，所有的朋友（不论性别）一律称兄，我自称为弟。觉得称兄论弟文雅，不是有“四海之内皆兄弟”的话吗！不是昨儿突发“女扮男装”奇想。

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Posted: 2009-05-24 13:29:30 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

mm莫愁，有白水兄在，要不要我帮你把神春拉住 Very Happy

嘻嘻，偶一猜白水“兄”就是第一个评帖子的，你忘了吗？丢丢小调皮曾经让白水姐姐使劲想她，偶也如法炮制，让白水姐姐...

就是没放在标题上

偶躲起来喽！

你们这群坏丫头, GG 再也不想你们了 Wink

GG你好好看看哈！是不是丫头？
...

又拿我开心，我先生听了你的回帖说我变成压寨夫人了。赶明儿不写诗，练几套少林功夫
(' guns in hand

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Posted: 2009-05-24 13:54:06 Post subject:

对不起！白水兄久居北美，误会“山寨”一词。此“山寨”非彼“山寨”，是国内这两年的新词，乃翻版重现的意思。

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Posted: 2009-05-24 15:52:45 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

又拿我开心，我先生听了你的回帖说我变成压寨夫人了。赶明儿不写诗，练几套少林功夫
...

哦，偶的易安姐姐：原本就是剑侠 Wink

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Posted: 2009-05-25 18:24:18 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

风来弄月，夜寂伤箫咽。
杯尽醉神春去，提幽句、诗成别。

牡丹残笑靥，愁思浓厚也。
抛泪苦心忧聚，身似旅、花如蝶.

很有李清照风味，学习了。

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-25 20:00:06 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

风来弄月，夜寂伤箫咽。
杯尽醉神春去，提幽句、诗成别。

牡丹残笑靥，愁思浓厚也。
抛泪苦心忧聚，身似旅、花如蝶.

很有李清照风味，学习了。

谢谢您的点评！问好

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Posted: 2009-05-26 05:34:56 Post subject:

山外青山楼外楼 , 花开花落水东流 . 心轻四季同佳景 , 春夏秋冬古韵讴 ! 莹雪,端午节好! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-26 11:40:02 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

又拿我开心，我先生听了你的回帖说我变成压寨夫人了。赶明儿不写诗，练几套少林功夫
...

哦，偶的易安姐姐：原本就是剑侠 Wink

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Posted: 2009-05-26 18:49:16 Post subject:

这里好热闹。莹雪mm端午节快乐!

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-05-27 13:11:23 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

这里好热闹。莹雪mm端午节快乐!

嘻嘻，热闹吧，谢谢晓松gg，节日快乐！

南北客
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Posted: 2009-06-01 18:38:56 Post subject:

喜欢上阕。一段时间没上来，莹雪MM功力大增。可喜可贺！

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