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【诗散文】 春天的早晨
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PostPosted: 2009-04-14 04:22:19    Post subject: 【诗散文】 春天的早晨 Reply with quote

春 天 的 早 晨

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现在是春天,我坐在春天的湖畔,一座一茶一诗刊;现在是早晨,鸟儿跳闹花枝吵醒花香,湖对岸飘来笛声、琴声和歌声…… 现在是春天的早晨,我刚改完一首诗歌,诗名就是《春天的早晨》。

早晨七点过,迎着晨练的人群,我来到金雁湖畔的巴丽岛茶园。这里的空气洗人肺腑,这里远离烦躁的市声。在柳色如衣、白鹭似侣的环境中,我研读了一位当代诗人的组诗和创作谈。正陶醉诗意和畅想梦境时,笛声像春光一样悠悠袭来,惹得我的心痒痒的,干脆拿起巴乌,立于水边,吹奏一曲《月光下的凤尾竹》。这浑厚的乐音粘着春色…… 漫过湖水…… 滑进人们的心灵……

八点过,我暂放诗书和音乐,让大脑休息,让目光和耳朵感受身边的春景。湖中的鹭岛上,鱼鹰、白鹭和夜鹭们正忙着享受爱情。多数的鱼鹰已飞向北方结婚去了,这两三只穿着黑礼服,伫立竹梢,在构思婚典的场景。轻盈的白鹭,头上飘出两丝长长的婚羽,背上耸出细绒似的繁殖羽。灰灰的夜鹭,头上也长出了两丝白羽。鹭鸶们跳啊、扑啊、啄啊、闹啊,满岛弥漫着爱情的声音;这些飞翔的精灵此时只忙着做窝、调情、下蛋、孵化新生命。环湖的柳树,垂丝摇着柔风,情枝吐出白絮,好像在做春梦,又似在临湖婚纱摄影……

在春景入怀、情迷春梦的状态下,我用红笔在草稿上划出淡淡的血痕,修改我写于清明节的诗歌。我的思绪从眼前的水波出发…… 漫向故乡…… 飘过江山…… 巡游地球…… 又沉沉地返回笔尖…… 在春天的早晨改完、誊抄出写春天的诗,我感觉幸福浸透身心、弥漫时空,这种幸福感肯定要高于有些人的海吃或偷情。此时已是九点过了,笛声走了…… 琴声溜了…… 歌声回家了…… 眼前一棵柳树,上有枯枝划伤湖光,白鹭夜鹭们就飞来,啄断枯枝,衔回垒筑爱巢。背后也有一棵枝繁叶茂的柳树,鹭鸶们你来我往,时时欢快地叫着,争啄嫩枝,叼着青绿,飞回鹭岛…… 只见水中排出串串美影…… 只觉心中流淌美妙的音律……

一晃就快十点了,阴阴的云中突然冒出了太阳的头。我灵光一闪,抓笔就写这篇记事散文。此时此景,我诗思浩荡而诗情沉郁。我向往未来,但我无法预测未来,就像2008年5月12日14:28前人类无法预测汶川大地震一样。我希望长寿,但不知我能活多久,因为我的同学和朋友已有几位先我而逝。我热爱春天,但春天也会生长白发,终会步向寒冬的雪景。我拥抱早晨,但就像现在,时光正渐渐走向正午,也会跌进痛心的暝色。

不管命运怎样残酷无情,但我拥有现在的生命和眼前的纸笔,拥有诗意的“现在”和未来可能有的无数个“诗意现在”,我就能诗意地生活,就能感知、提炼、创造和表现生命的诗意和生活的美好:

春 天 的 早 晨

我醉入生活的花香我醒来灵魂的鸟鸣
春天走向我啊我走进春天的早晨

我用一个春天的早晨
给母亲治病 为父亲祭坟

我用两个春天的早晨
给爱情擦伤 为婚姻增温

我用三个春天的早晨
抚慰残痛的山河重建家园的美景

我用四个春天的早晨
捂盖地球的战火支撑人类的文明

我流出幸福的露珠我步入芬芳的黎明
要是活在自己的诗中我就是春天的早晨


2009-04-9 11:30
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PostPosted: 2009-04-15 08:32:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

春景入怀,寄兴寓情,极富诗歌的跳跃性。但如果从意脉看,又似乎跳跃性大了些。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-15 11:46:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢冰清君的读赏和意见!春天的问候!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-15 21:40:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

心中常有春,笔下如有神。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-16 14:31:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

有一身灰的鼓励,我一定一身春。问春好!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-16 14:40:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

“活在自己的诗中我就是春天的早晨”奇思妙想,文美诗佳。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-23 02:03:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

春天的早晨里,有关生活,有关人生的思考。。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-13 04:14:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢米兄的读评和鼓励!

谢荷梦初夏出水来访!
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