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《南下广州》(组诗)
沈奕军
童生


Joined: 31 Mar 2008
Posts: 35
Location: 陕西
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PostPosted: 2009-04-24 17:28:08    Post subject: 《南下广州》(组诗) Reply with quote

《南下广州》(组诗)
作者:沈奕军
《我不敢想起故乡》

风送走了桃花
一片叶子挡住了视线
野鸭在小河旁
母亲匆匆的把槐花收捡
故乡被火车拉的越来越远
月亮陪我走到天边

五月
春已收敛了许多
母亲的嘱咐像一张膏药
在贴满乡愁的异乡
无法止住内心的痛

我不敢想起故乡
我怕流下的泪水
唤醒这个雨季

《火车》

远方
被火车一点一点拉近
我不知道终点预示着什么

天被夜彻底抹黑
从陌生的村子逃出的光
无法点亮村庄的静

火车
延着铁轨一直向前


《南下广州》

南方像一枚金币
小时候我就想去捧摘

一个叫广州的人
带走了我快乐的童年
他手上的钱足以为我买一箱冰激凌

南下广州
我迷失在他乡

《在建筑工地》

刚到广州
身上的钱已所剩无几
工地成为最后的栖息地

李大叔从28层掉下后
我无法面对内心的恐惧
在金钱面前我把头放的很低

在建筑工地
我脆弱的经不起一张纸

《村里小红》

村里小红
和桃花一起南下的
桃花在异乡无法结出果子
就像小红不知道她爹
没有走过去年冬天

我不敢相信
一朵鲜花
就这么枯萎
就像我不愿不接受
小红的变化

想起单纯 美丽 可爱的小红
一滴泪水掉在异乡
没有打动一个路人

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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2009-04-24 19:48:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

深情的描述,问好.
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惠远飞
童生


Joined: 14 Jan 2009
Posts: 74
Location: 广东东莞
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PostPosted: 2009-04-25 19:30:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

打工题材的诗歌,不错!

但个别句子过于直白,丧失了诗原有的艺术空间。个见!
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安红红
同进士出身


Joined: 07 Feb 2009
Posts: 1808

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PostPosted: 2009-04-27 22:37:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

已读~问好~
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