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PostPosted: 2007-01-12 15:33:47    Post subject: 月缺月圆 Reply with quote
月缺月圆

新月
像船
漂在文字的星海
采一舱云中的诗
绽开白色的莲

月满中天, 惊世
冷艳
广寒宫的长袖
舞一个圈
句号
画一个冰冻的符点

轨迹
像条线
甩一弯残月的勾
在银河的尽头
钓起你的
诗绢
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PostPosted: 2007-01-12 15:46:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
beautiful
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-12 16:00:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
Gentle as I am
a man,
no worry that I will drop
down
even into the water,
you will not be drowned
as white as a silver button
slowly and slowly
unzipped
across the ocean
I will feel you
as blue waves
trembling through my fingers
across your translucent body
as light
as wings of dreams
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-12 17:26:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
Gentle as I am
a man,
no worry that I will drop
down
even into the water,
you will not be drowned
as white as a silver button
slowly and slowly
unzipped
across the ocean
I will feel you
as blue waves
trembling through my fingers
across your translucent body
as light
as wings of dreams
Very Happy


WOW, 还真钓出诗绢了, 很美的. 谢谢分享.
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PostPosted: 2007-01-17 08:55:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
美~欣赏，可惜和平老师的要借助词典才能看了, Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-17 18:53:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
美~欣赏，可惜和平老师的要借助词典才能看了, Very Happy

记得你曾翻译过诗歌, 何不即兴一译(虽然岛班已有译文)? 有时突发奇想, 如果A写英文, B 译成中文, C再把B的中文译成英文,,,,,, 猜想不用几个人传译这首诗歌一定面目全非 Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-01-18 04:44:52    Post subject: Reply with quote
Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-18 13:15:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
有深意，新颖。学习了。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 07:59:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
美~欣赏，可惜和平老师的要借助词典才能看了, Very Happy

记得你曾翻译过诗歌, 何不即兴一译(虽然岛班已有译文)? 有时突发奇想, 如果A写英文, B 译成中文, C再把B的中文译成英文,,,,,, 猜想不用几个人传译这首诗歌一定面目全非 Wink


译文没有看到，如果看到了，估计就没法翻译了,哈~
可惜没词典,系统没装好呢,有时间试下,A-B-C我觉得是好注意哦 Very Happy
等我翻好了，你负责找Ｃ吧
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 08:07:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
美~欣赏，可惜和平老师的要借助词典才能看了, Very Happy

记得你曾翻译过诗歌, 何不即兴一译(虽然岛班已有译文)? 有时突发奇想, 如果A写英文, B 译成中文, C再把B的中文译成英文,,,,,, 猜想不用几个人传译这首诗歌一定面目全非 Wink


我在大学就把英语扔了，改学＂米西米西了＂，现在是英语文盲，翻译的东西肯定不能看，呵呵，你不会看我笑话吧，以前翻译的，也不清楚对不对呢，理解不了的单词，我就自己瞎凑了 Sad
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 10:44:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
杯中冲浪 wrote:
Very Happy Very Happy


冲浪, 你笑什么? Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 10:45:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
风动 wrote:
有深意，新颖。学习了。


问好风动, 喜欢你的诗歌. 等............
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 10:46:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
美~欣赏，可惜和平老师的要借助词典才能看了, Very Happy

记得你曾翻译过诗歌, 何不即兴一译(虽然岛班已有译文)? 有时突发奇想, 如果A写英文, B 译成中文, C再把B的中文译成英文,,,,,, 猜想不用几个人传译这首诗歌一定面目全非 Wink


译文没有看到，如果看到了，估计就没法翻译了,哈~
可惜没词典,系统没装好呢,有时间试下,A-B-C我觉得是好注意哦 Very Happy
等我翻好了，你负责找Ｃ吧


正因如此, 打消了给你练接的念头. Cool
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 10:52:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
美~欣赏，可惜和平老师的要借助词典才能看了, Very Happy

记得你曾翻译过诗歌, 何不即兴一译(虽然岛班已有译文)? 有时突发奇想, 如果A写英文, B 译成中文, C再把B的中文译成英文,,,,,, 猜想不用几个人传译这首诗歌一定面目全非 Wink


我在大学就把英语扔了，改学＂米西米西了＂，现在是英语文盲，翻译的东西肯定不能看，呵呵，你不会看我笑话吧，以前翻译的，也不清楚对不对呢，理解不了的单词，我就自己瞎凑了 Sad


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前些天有位朋友在网上读了我的<七绝>, 回和一首, 在电话中读与我, 并要我帮他以"清水正夫"的笔名跟在我的帖后. 近半月了, 我一直在偷懒, 因为这个笔名 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 10:58:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
现在知道月光才是位MM~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 10:59:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
杯中冲浪 wrote:
Very Happy Very Happy


冲浪, 你笑什么? Wink


笑的诡秘~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 17:01:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
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现在知道月光才是位MM~ Very Happy


不是吧? Cool

ANYWAY, WAITING FOR YOUR TRANSLATION. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 17:57:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
现在知道月光才是位MM~ Very Happy


不是吧? Cool

ANYWAY, WAITING FOR YOUR TRANSLATION. Very Happy


满天是月，满地是水，搞不清公母。。。 Laughing
应该标示清楚，下手也好分个轻重。。。 Twisted Evil

俺现在是按照深浅来分。

故作深沉的是公（象一个紧锁着的空抽屉）；
不深不浅刚刚好的是母。。。 Laughing （至少不挑战俺那个位数的智商，读来帮助消化，松筋活骨，延年益寿。。。）

开玩笑的阿，别介意！
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 18:23:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
nobody wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
现在知道月光才是位MM~ Very Happy


不是吧? Cool

ANYWAY, WAITING FOR YOUR TRANSLATION. Very Happy


满天是月，满地是水，搞不清公母。。。 Laughing
应该标示清楚，下手也好分个轻重。。。 Twisted Evil

俺现在是按照深浅来分。

故作深沉的是公（象一个紧锁着的空抽屉）；
不深不浅刚刚好的是母。。。 Laughing （至少不挑战俺那个位数的智商，读来帮助消化，松筋活骨，延年益寿。。。）

开玩笑的阿，别介意！


我到觉得nobody是神仙呢. 月点灯, 水濡墨. 泼到纸上还要分深浅么? Cool
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PostPosted: 2007-01-19 18:38:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水兄说得妙！够经典！

本大神仙只是想避免：
一腔柔情，都给了gg
一顿臭骂，却给了mm
所以gg们最好都穿上画着十环九环的靶子。。。
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