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闲逛或不闲逛(上海行组诗之二十三)
山城子
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 22:24:02    Post subject: 闲逛或不闲逛(上海行组诗之二十三) Reply with quote

闲逛或不闲逛(上海行组诗之二十三)
文/ 山城子

& XX超市

任人开阔徜徉
自动地梯上梯下变换多层地面
蓝眼睛白皮肤晃过一周的生活
堆得购物车很饱满
我是要欣赏绿色的太阳
升起每一重地平线


& XX广场

好奇而入上下阔大方知可以称之
尽管通常的意义很遥远
一处一处商事厅室的干净漂亮透明
尽可以从容怡然
日或韩料理消费
都是楚楚男女或红光满面


& XX公园

凭空别致出一座长长的廊桥
绿色就立体起来了
可以看到羽毛球在脚下飞来飞去
还有湖水草地游人
两只黑天鹅已经来了几年了
却一直都没繁衍

2009-04-07于上海
(通讯:561104 贵州省平坝县红湖学校 李德贵)
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 07:06:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

来看看老师的放大镜~
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 15:49:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

参加老师的旅游团
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2009-04-08 17:35:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

我的旅游本周末结束——回贵州了!!
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浪在天涯
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PostPosted: 2009-04-08 19:51:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵
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PostPosted: 2009-04-09 10:21:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

买到好东西了哪~~

问好~
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PostPosted: 2009-04-09 10:21:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

买到好东西了哪~~

问好~
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PostPosted: 2009-04-11 17:56:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这种造型的诗。问好山城子老师~~
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PostPosted: 2009-04-12 22:18:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

实在,如临现场!
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