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justjust
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发表于: 2009-03-13 11:05:44 发表主题: Sonnet XII (一晃八年)

harsh work has turned my legs to a balloon so that i drag my feet to find repose as my sunken eyes see the shiny moon my heart is pierced by gloom and pain hence grows when you and i held hands in bright moon ray you reassured me of your decision i thus withdrew my hand and walked away but memories had blurred all my vision whenever i now think of Concord's spring your eyes appear in mine and mine then weep: i wish to fly to you on the moon's wing to hear you breathe when you are sound asleep a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart his sweetheart's heart may well be far apart

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发表于: 2009-03-13 12:09:43 发表主题:

gentle and romantic _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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发表于: 2009-03-13 15:28:00 发表主题:

a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart his sweetheart's heart may well be far apart 很工整。欣赏。

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发表于: 2009-03-14 08:18:41 发表主题: sigh

hepingdao 写到:

gentle and romantic

two years of talking, laughing and sporting on walden pond reminds me of many fond memories.

thank you for reading.

kino 写到:

a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart
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oh, a woman's heart. as you know, a couplet is necessary in a shakespearen sonnet. but of course, i am no comparison to shakespeare:)
thank you.

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发表于: 2009-03-14 18:21:03 发表主题:

just, welcome! nice sonnet. 一晃八年, move on and upwards. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins