justjust
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 Posted: 2009-03-13 11:05:44 Post subject: Sonnet XII (一晃八年) |
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harsh work has turned my legs to a balloon
so that i drag my feet to find repose
as my sunken eyes see the shiny moon
my heart is pierced by gloom and pain hence grows
when you and i held hands in bright moon ray
you reassured me of your decision
i thus withdrew my hand and walked away
but memories had blurred all my vision
whenever i now think of Concord's spring
your eyes appear in mine and mine then weep:
i wish to fly to you on the moon's wing
to hear you breathe when you are sound asleep
a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart
his sweetheart's heart may well be far apart |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2009-03-13 12:09:43 Post subject: |
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gentle and romantic
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kino
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| Posted: 2009-03-13 15:28:00 Post subject: |
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a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart
his sweetheart's heart may well be far apart
很工整。欣赏。 |
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justjust
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| Posted: 2009-03-14 08:18:41 Post subject: sigh |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
| gentle and romantic |
two years of talking, laughing and sporting on walden pond reminds me of many fond memories.
thank you for reading.
| kino wrote: |
a man's sweetheart is carved in his fond heart
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oh, a woman's heart. as you know, a couplet is necessary in a shakespearen sonnet. but of course, i am no comparison to shakespeare:)
thank you. |
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Lake
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| Posted: 2009-03-14 18:21:03 Post subject: |
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just, welcome! nice sonnet. 一晃八年, move on and upwards. 
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justjust
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| Posted: 2009-03-14 22:23:36 Post subject: |
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| Lake wrote: |
| just, welcome! nice sonnet. 一晃八年, move on and upwards. |
Thank you. i will continue my journey of searching for my love. |
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