李振 童生
Joined: 19 Feb 2009 Posts: 17
李振Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-21 10:03:29 Post subject: 春 |
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春
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春风
潮涌过河堤
排成行的杨柳
向行人, 点头问好
双蝶飞舞
满树桃花欲争艳
勾画出
一幅春的图画
二
垂柳丝飘
春风裁出
碧波沱河
老翁垂钓
芳草青青
水鸟戏嬉,
哦! 轻点
别跑了鱼儿 ! |
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轩雨抚梦 童生
Joined: 18 Aug 2007 Posts: 38
轩雨抚梦Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-21 16:35:13 Post subject: |
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蒙太奇的手法
绘尽春的生命!
问好朋友! |
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李振 童生
Joined: 19 Feb 2009 Posts: 17
李振Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-21 16:54:03 Post subject: |
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轩雨抚梦 wrote: |
蒙太奇的手法
绘尽春的生命!
问好朋友! |
多谢朋友指导,远握! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-21 17:05:28 Post subject: |
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芳草青青
水鸟戏嬉,
哦! 轻点
别跑了鱼儿 !
轻松, 自如.希望与其他诗友多交流.问好. |
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李振 童生
Joined: 19 Feb 2009 Posts: 17
李振Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-21 17:27:32 Post subject: 2 |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
芳草青青
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谢谢版主,多指导! |
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中国湖北:文胜 秀才
Joined: 20 Dec 2007 Posts: 149 Location: 中国湖北省襄樊市 中国湖北:文胜Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-21 21:43:05 Post subject: |
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阅读。 _________________ 无他。爱诗,仅此。
诗心、歌爱、走路。足矣!
个人网站http://blog.sina.com.cn/ak5hmwz79sytbd0d |
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李振 童生
Joined: 19 Feb 2009 Posts: 17
李振Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-22 03:45:23 Post subject: |
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谢谢!问好! |
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安红红 同进士出身

Joined: 07 Feb 2009 Posts: 1808
安红红Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-22 08:03:33 Post subject: |
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已读~ _________________ 如果不开始,会失去过程。
QQ:3972083
微信:qisebaihuayuan |
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李振 童生
Joined: 19 Feb 2009 Posts: 17
李振Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-28 05:32:30 Post subject: |
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问好! |
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