| 李振 童生
 
 
 Joined: 19 Feb 2009
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				|  Posted: 2009-02-21 10:03:29    Post subject: 春 |   |  
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				| 春 一
 春风
 潮涌过河堤
 排成行的杨柳
 向行人, 点头问好
 双蝶飞舞
 满树桃花欲争艳
 勾画出
 一幅春的图画
 二
 垂柳丝飘
 春风裁出
 碧波沱河
 老翁垂钓
 芳草青青
 水鸟戏嬉,
 哦! 轻点
 别跑了鱼儿 !
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		| 轩雨抚梦 童生
 
 
 Joined: 18 Aug 2007
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				|  Posted: 2009-02-21 16:35:13    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 蒙太奇的手法 绘尽春的生命!
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		| 李振 童生
 
 
 Joined: 19 Feb 2009
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				|  Posted: 2009-02-21 16:54:03    Post subject: |   |  
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多谢朋友指导,远握! 
	  | 轩雨抚梦 wrote: |  
	  | 蒙太奇的手法 绘尽春的生命!
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
 Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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 Location: TORONTO
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				|  Posted: 2009-02-21 17:05:28    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 芳草青青 水鸟戏嬉,
 哦! 轻点
 别跑了鱼儿 !
 
 轻松, 自如.希望与其他诗友多交流.问好.
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		| 李振 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-02-21 17:27:32    Post subject: 2 |   |  
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谢谢版主,多指导! 
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	  | 芳草青青 ...
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		| 中国湖北:文胜 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 20 Dec 2007
 Posts: 149
 Location: 中国湖北省襄樊市
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				|  Posted: 2009-02-21 21:43:05    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 阅读。 _________________
 无他。爱诗,仅此。
 诗心、歌爱、走路。足矣!
 个人网站http://blog.sina.com.cn/ak5hmwz79sytbd0d
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		| 李振 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-02-22 03:45:23    Post subject: |   |  
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		| 安红红 同进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 07 Feb 2009
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				|  Posted: 2009-02-22 08:03:33    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 已读~ _________________
 如果不开始,会失去过程。
 QQ:3972083
 微信:qisebaihuayuan
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		| 李振 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-02-28 05:32:30    Post subject: |   |  
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