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五律 . 咏松

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Posted: 2013-07-20 22:14:00 Post subject: 五律 . 咏松

五律 . 咏松司马从戎志在九天外，临渊坚不移。山巅掩鹤道，云海显威仪。寂寞护泥土，深情荫虎罴。曾经风雨洗，守望竟无疑！

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Posted: 2013-07-21 00:44:56 Post subject:

旧作一首和之：五绝题黄山迎客松黄山迎客松，凛凛傲苍穹。阅尽沧桑事，开怀迎朔风。

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Posted: 2013-07-22 21:33:57 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

旧作一首和之：
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大作拜读，学习了。谢谢。

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Posted: 2013-07-23 05:28:50 Post subject:

互相学习。问好！

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Posted: 2013-07-24 05:11:11 Post subject:

司马从戎 wrote:

五律 . 咏松
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也来一首咏松凑个热闹

五律咏松

屋前迎客松，
四季郁葱葱。
展臂迎宾主，
容姿至始终。
历经屋易主，
不改本松风。
阅尽人间事，
生灵皆大同。
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Posted: 2013-07-26 20:26:32 Post subject:

Daxia wrote:

司马从戎 wrote:

五律 . 咏松
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也来一首咏松凑个热闹
...

大作拜读，学习了。谢谢。

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Posted: 2013-07-27 23:06:09 Post subject:

拜读了。学习。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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Posted: 2013-07-29 20:35:21 Post subject:

谢谢先生鼓励。

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Posted: 2013-07-30 20:45:14 Post subject:

司马从戎 wrote:

五律 . 咏松
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志在九天外，临渊坚不移。
山巅掩鹤道，云海显威仪。

起，乘皆妙，学习了。

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Posted: 2013-07-31 19:47:33 Post subject:

问好诗友！学习了！

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Posted: 2013-08-01 21:52:18 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

司马从戎 wrote:

五律 . 咏松
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志在九天外，临渊坚不移。
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多谢先生鼓励。

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Posted: 2013-08-01 21:53:34 Post subject:

冷雨 wrote:

问好诗友！学习了！

问好！

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