司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-07-20 22:14:00 Post subject: 五律 . 咏松 |
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五律 . 咏松
司马从戎
志在九天外,临渊坚不移。
山巅掩鹤道,云海显威仪。
寂寞护泥土,深情荫虎罴。
曾经风雨洗,守望竟无疑! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-07-21 00:44:56 Post subject: |
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旧作一首和之:
五绝 题黄山迎客松
黄山迎客松,凛凛傲苍穹。
阅尽沧桑事,开怀迎朔风。 |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-07-22 21:33:57 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
旧作一首和之:
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大作拜读,学习了。谢谢。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-07-23 05:28:50 Post subject: |
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互相学习。问好! |
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Daxia 秀才
Joined: 26 Apr 2013 Posts: 163 Location: Mississauga, Canada DaxiaCollection |
Posted: 2013-07-24 05:11:11 Post subject: |
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也来一首咏松凑个热闹
五律 咏松
屋前迎客松,
四季郁葱葱。
展臂迎宾主,
容姿至始终。
历经屋易主,
不改本松风。
阅尽人间事,
生灵皆大同。 _________________ Daxia |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-07-26 20:26:32 Post subject: |
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Daxia wrote: |
也来一首咏松凑个热闹
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大作拜读,学习了。谢谢。 |
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游向高原的鱼 秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 382
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Posted: 2013-07-27 23:06:09 Post subject: |
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拜读了。学习。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。 |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-07-29 20:35:21 Post subject: |
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谢谢先生鼓励。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-07-30 20:45:14 Post subject: |
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志在九天外,临渊坚不移。
山巅掩鹤道,云海显威仪。
起,乘皆妙,学习了。 |
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冷雨 秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010 Posts: 439
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Posted: 2013-07-31 19:47:33 Post subject: |
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问好诗友!学习了! |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-08-01 21:52:18 Post subject: |
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秋叶 wrote: |
志在九天外,临渊坚不移。
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多谢先生鼓励。 |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
司马从戎Collection |
Posted: 2013-08-01 21:53:34 Post subject: |
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问好! |
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