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情人节特殊奉献

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2009-02-13 23:10:01 Post subject: 情人节特殊奉献

情人节给挚爱的献诗你好明天有人想你吗有在跋涉途中他的想念有多么遥远不远在最快的马蹄声下他的思念就要到吗不会他得需用一生的时间（2009年2月13日---北京时间21时） _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

爱月
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Joined: 12 Jun 2008
Posts: 250

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Posted: 2009-02-14 00:22:26 Post subject:

问情人节快乐。 _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112

孙国福
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Joined: 08 Feb 2009
Posts: 63
Location: 吉林长春
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Posted: 2009-02-14 02:34:35 Post subject:

意境深远！情诗典范！欣赏！学习!! _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2009-02-14 08:59:54 Post subject:

孙国福 wrote:

意境深远！情诗典范！欣赏！学习!!

WOW, 你的评价这么高. 我开始怀疑自己了. Embarassed

因为我觉得这首诗歌有很好的骨架和内涵, 但感觉缺少了一点填充. 如果再铺展开些, 会是一首很感人的诗歌. 己见, 不妥见谅. 溜了 Wink

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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Posted: 2009-02-14 16:03:58 Post subject:

谢爱月国福白水各位! 白水说得有理。但，也不可强行铺展，有时就应惜墨如金。我也是借口，一时铺展不开罢了。哈哈。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

娇娇
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Posted: 2009-02-14 16:14:36 Post subject:

感动着...... _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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Posted: 2009-02-14 16:52:15 Post subject:

不会他得需用一生的时间问好你的情人节，祝福~

文立冰
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Joined: 27 Dec 2008
Posts: 71

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Posted: 2009-02-14 19:45:58 Post subject:

看似简单实有深意，成自家之风！

韩少君
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Location: 吉林四平
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Posted: 2009-02-15 13:39:52 Post subject:

谢谢娇娇明月立冰诗歌之道，惜墨如金。情满笔瘦，总有回眸。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

安红红
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Joined: 07 Feb 2009
Posts: 1808

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Posted: 2009-02-16 02:29:52 Post subject:

问好～一问一答～跋涉和马蹄让俺想起了王洛宾的《在那遥远的地方》这支歌～～ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

晴宝儿
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Joined: 03 Jun 2008
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Posted: 2009-02-22 12:19:22 Post subject:

呵呵，给挚爱听了吗，如果感动了，那就是成功 _________________ 晴宝儿

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2009-02-25 14:25:51 Post subject:

谢谢安红红睛宝儿我偏爱短诗。八字原则：美丽、自由、纯洁、高迈！向大家学习 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

陈陈
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Joined: 23 Jan 2009
Posts: 46

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Posted: 2009-02-25 17:17:34 Post subject:

喜欢少君博客中的诗和音乐，顶一下。把仅存的善良、美好召集起来，开个批斗会，把黑煤窑，三鹿奶粉的帮凶揪出来，不出声的视为从犯。不能啊，不能现实砍倒一棵树，心灵就伐倒一片林；现实践踏了一片草，心灵就造出一片沙漠。想想孩子，不能这样啊！ “嗨！醒醒，又做梦了。” 还好，恶梦醒来是早晨！

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