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情人节特殊奉献
韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-02-13 23:10:01    Post subject: 情人节特殊奉献 Reply with quote

情人节给挚爱的献诗



你好
明天有人想你吗


在跋涉途中

他的想念有多么遥远

不远
在最快的马蹄声下

他的思念就要到吗

不会
他得需用一生的时间


(2009年2月13日---北京时间21时)
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爱月
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 00:22:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

问情人节快乐。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 02:34:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

意境深远!情诗典范!欣赏!学习!!
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在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 08:59:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

孙国福 wrote:
意境深远!情诗典范!欣赏!学习!!


WOW, 你的评价这么高. 我开始怀疑自己了. Embarassed 因为我觉得这首诗歌有很好的骨架和内涵, 但感觉缺少了一点填充. 如果再铺展开些, 会是一首很感人的诗歌. 己见, 不妥见谅. 溜了 Wink
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 16:03:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢 爱月 国福 白水各位!
白水说得有理。但,也不可强行铺展,有时就应惜墨如金。

我也是借口,一时铺展不开罢了。哈哈。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 16:14:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

感动着......
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 16:52:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

不会
他得需用一生的时间

问好你的情人节,祝福~
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 19:45:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

看似简单实有深意,成自家之风!
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-02-15 13:39:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢娇娇 明月 立冰 诗歌之道,惜墨如金。情满笔瘦,总有回眸。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-16 02:29:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好~一问一答~

跋涉和马蹄让俺想起了王洛宾的《在那遥远的地方》这支歌~~
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 12:19:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,给挚爱听了吗,如果感动了,那就是成功
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PostPosted: 2009-02-25 14:25:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢 安红红 睛宝儿

我偏爱短诗。八字原则:美丽、自由、纯洁、高迈!

向大家学习
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PostPosted: 2009-02-25 17:17:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢少君博客中的诗和音乐,顶一下。
把仅存的善良、美好召集起来,开个批斗会,把黑煤窑,三鹿奶粉的帮凶揪出来,不出声的视为从犯。
不能啊,不能现实砍倒一棵树,心灵就伐倒一片林;现实践踏了一片草,心灵就造出一片沙漠。想想孩子,不能这样啊!
“嗨!醒醒,又做梦了。”
还好,恶梦醒来是早晨!
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