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《寻找我的海平面》《黑夜与白马》诗六首

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Posted: 2009-01-13 19:47:16 Post subject: 《寻找我的海平面》《黑夜与白马》诗六首

《寻找我的海平面》文／晴宝儿　这些芦苇柔软得像我的羽毛摩挲出一个又一个梦夜的波光明暗闪烁　夜越深光越近　躲进羽毛的温暖舒适无比　这些芦苇尖锐得像我的羽毛刺向深夜里裸露的肌肤不设防的微笑　猝不及防的抽搐寒冷甚至不过夜　黑夜不能安睡　就请太阳早些起床我的羽毛我的武器　喋喋不休的芦苇　给你夜给你宽大　我以我的沉默展开翅尖从最茂盛的草丛起飞　飞向海平面红日喷薄的地平线　环顾四周洁白的长羽划着优美的弧线那是我的伙伴　都是我的伙伴这些自由的白天鹅 2009年1月5日. 　《黑夜与白马》　黑夜逼近时我更像一个懦夫踩着宽大的幕布撕扯紫苏叶片的锯齿深绿边缘的紫从手掌的温度滑进厚重尘埃的帷幕　那一眨眼就隐遁的紫叶像一条无声三十年的河流在黑夜呛人的味道中迅速封冻　碎裂　坠落的冰块咔嚓咔嚓　仿佛被青春伤了的脸颊疤痕鲜艳经年不愈　当我悲哀地与紫色道别我更羞愧于面对一角苏子叶的菲边这些零落的残叶把旧年的美丽开得漫山遍野还有满天星还有康乃馨　苏叶的香气黑夜中的乳白抚平年少的暴躁和胆怯走向黑夜的深处浅处紫色的草丛里我青春不老如箭过隙的白马哦我要牵出你 2009年1月10日. 　《让水涌回海的内部》　忧伤的月色是你衷情于沉沦进海水深处铺展一种绝望的美还是我纵容自己的迷恋临水读你残缺的诗把自己想象成平声的韵脚　而海水的一再退缩让上一次潮汐成为久远的空白我无法捕捉空气中的水珠你的融入或消散海的水花来去自由　平静的海水层打捞一枚月光中的贝壳多么无能为力忍受一滴水的酸涩　每个有涛声呼啸的月夜让水涌回海的内部让晴朗像我迷失的爱情湿漉漉地曼延 2009年1月12日. 　《太阳的翅膀》　走过季节温暖的舌尖我依然张望　在你粗糙的掌心读一条沙砾上的纹路　弯曲的生命线隐入迷宫的墙角牵动手指颤栗的节奏可是风沙尽处的一泊水源　用太阳下的蜡粘贴一副翅膀躲避无数个炎炎烈日练习飞翔的平衡　冲破围墙和自由的高度当我站在气流之上那些呼啸与风声多么像快乐的两条小尾巴 2009年1月12日　《向上看，也许水面只齐肩》文／晴宝儿　云覆盖云　低气压持续下降天空和水面的空隙里我只闭一下眼　尽可能完成不窒息的呼吸　　那些绿像无根的水妖齐刷刷浮出水底　一瞬间水面　空气和孤立的我　绿莹莹地缠绕　 “向上看，也许水面只齐肩。” 在水中打开父亲的锦囊金光撒向太阳　太阳洒下水滴　跳上几曲蜿蜒的浮桥　我听到水流下暴躁碎萍的叹息一如我毫不犹豫踏向阳光的脚步清晰有声 2009年1月14日　《一滴水的坠落》　又一次看到水滴　阴暗的明亮里飞扬的尘沙里　数次与你相遇你轻若片羽　却明察秋毫阳光下我多处不愈的隐伤　从胁迫一片叶的坠落　到寺院桃花盛开的指纹　你始终锋芒如炬炽烤海滩上我不完整的履历　大片的水都上了岸　你依然若我在阳光与夜晚的缝隙翻来覆去调换一只沙漏的方向　或许你不想滴成寒光的利剑只是时光的片羽太仓促它来不及打磨我远去的青春和我们一直捧着的矜持与镇定 2009年1月14日 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2009-01-15 10:35:56 Post subject:

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Posted: 2009-01-15 18:34:58 Post subject:

近日太忙未及读诗. 抽空来看看, 打开这几首还真不错, 脱离了小女子气的温柔更令人感动. 欣赏

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Posted: 2009-01-16 00:49:42 Post subject:

宝儿的诗句已经进入一种境界，写得很精致，欣赏，问好宝儿。 _________________ 诗观:1，我手写我心,文字为情感服务，形式为内容服务.2，我不是诗人，我只是一个爱写诗的人，诗人的桂冠对于我来说有些沉重。

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Posted: 2009-01-17 10:38:16 Post subject:

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近日太忙未及读诗. 抽空来看看, 打开这几首还真不错, 脱离了小女子气的温柔更令人感动. 欣赏

辛苦了，忙碌愉快，感谢百忙中来感受；）
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宝儿的诗句已经进入一种境界，写得很精致，欣赏，问好宝儿。

谢谢评感，问好朝晖！
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Posted: 2009-01-17 15:54:22 Post subject:

这一组状态很不错，提读.

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Posted: 2009-01-21 01:29:38 Post subject:

问好，感谢感受和提读.新年好 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2009-01-21 06:36:59 Post subject:

收藏了~~ 喜欢! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2009-01-27 22:30:41 Post subject:

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收藏了~~

喜欢!

谢谢喜欢，问好，新年快乐！
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Posted: 2009-01-31 08:06:29 Post subject:

学习学习女性诗歌！ _________________ 惠远飞，湖北十堰人。作品见《青春》《芳草》《热风》《短篇小说》《青春诗歌》《作家报》等数十种报刊。著有诗集《流浪的衣裳》。博客：huiyfei.blog.163.com

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Posted: 2009-01-31 23:24:48 Post subject:

呵呵，湖北诗人好，我去读读男性诗歌 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2009-05-30 18:32:53 Post subject:

问好宝儿,又一组力作,待我细细品味.

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Posted: 2009-06-01 04:59:44 Post subject:

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问好宝儿,又一组力作,待我细细品味.

问好多批，六月好。
推荐了首湮雨朦朦的诗给华夏副编初选。
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Posted: 2009-06-01 05:01:11 Post subject:

感谢斑斑悬挂，愿与各位朋友交流，同问好快乐！ _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2009-06-02 13:43:53 Post subject:

诗风似乎又有变化！！

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Posted: 2009-06-02 16:10:41 Post subject:

好诗歌，学习了！ _________________ [新浪博客]http://blog.sina.com.cn/nmlm

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Posted: 2009-06-02 22:33:45 Post subject:

物我相应，带读者进入你美丽的思维空间 _________________ 倒悬壶子的人

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Posted: 2009-06-05 02:30:32 Post subject:

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诗风似乎又有变化！！

曾与朋友讨论过关于“风格”，我比较喜欢不固有风格，尝试多种方式与形式的书写。呵呵，问好：）
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好诗歌，学习了！

茂友谦虚，互相学习：）
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