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四季歌 ( 二 )
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 16:32:33    Post subject: 四季歌 ( 二 ) Reply with quote
. . . 夏 游 . . .
<调寄鹧鸪天>
踏遍青山賞百花,
泛舟綠水浸明霞.
一丘一壑風流在,
恬適情怀景緻佳.

步潇灑,
历天涯,
浅吟低唱渡年华.
闲來几句漁樵话,
困倦斟杯龙井茶!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 17:27:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
踏遍青山，泛舟绿水，渔樵话，龙井茶。。。

夏游多潇洒！
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 17:32:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
读来舒适，怡人。节日快乐！
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PostPosted: 2010-09-10 02:22:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
夏 游

一丘一壑風流在,

爽快
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PostPosted: 2010-09-10 07:16:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
謝庆宏欣赏!
几句漁樵闲话,宜情綠水青山!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-10 07:20:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
笑聊,身心快乐,生活宜情!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-10 07:28:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
影沉寒水,恬適情怀就,山水也風流!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-10 17:15:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
和上一首鹧鸪天：

绿水青山好景幽，
心情旷放不知愁。
热风渡遍菡萏在，
美酒三杯赞歌悠。

轻举步，展明眸。
婷婷玉立众花柔。
细观慢赏吟诗去，
扇底摇出秀画浮。

匆匆临屏，错误难免，恳请指正。

两处错误已改，谢谢白云兄指正！
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PostPosted: 2010-09-11 07:54:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
謝謝笑聊和詞! 游山玩水不知愁!
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