| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-09-09 16:32:33    Post subject: 四季歌 ( 二 ) |   |  
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				| . . . 夏 游 . . . <调寄鹧鸪天>
 踏遍青山賞百花,
 泛舟綠水浸明霞.
 一丘一壑風流在,
 恬適情怀景緻佳.
 
 步潇灑,
 历天涯,
 浅吟低唱渡年华.
 闲來几句漁樵话,
 困倦斟杯龙井茶!
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 诗中岁月,
 笛里关山.
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-09-09 17:27:13    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 踏遍青山,泛舟绿水,渔樵话,龙井茶。。。 
 夏游多潇洒!
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		| 笑聊 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-09-09 17:32:17    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 读来舒适,怡人。节日快乐! |  | 
	
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		| 影沉寒水 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-09-10 02:22:44    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 夏 游 
 一丘一壑風流在,
 
 爽快
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 诗无涯。思在线
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		| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-09-10 07:16:25    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 謝庆宏欣赏! 几句漁樵闲话,宜情綠水青山!
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 诗中岁月,
 笛里关山.
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		| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-09-10 07:20:21    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 笑聊,身心快乐,生活宜情! _________________
 诗中岁月,
 笛里关山.
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		| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-09-10 07:28:18    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 影沉寒水,恬適情怀就,山水也風流! _________________
 诗中岁月,
 笛里关山.
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		| 笑聊 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-09-10 17:15:46    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 和上一首鹧鸪天: 
 绿水青山好景幽,
 心情旷放不知愁。
 热风渡遍菡萏在,
 美酒三杯赞歌悠。
 
 轻举步,展明眸。
 婷婷玉立众花柔。
 细观慢赏吟诗去,
 扇底摇出秀画浮。
 
 匆匆临屏,错误难免,恳请指正。
 
 两处错误已改,谢谢白云兄指正!
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		| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-09-11 07:54:24    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 謝謝笑聊和詞! 游山玩水不知愁! _________________
 诗中岁月,
 笛里关山.
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