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次韵和闻山老山《秋日忆旧》

冰清
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Posted: 2008-11-28 11:02:03 Post subject: 次韵和闻山老山《秋日忆旧》

次韵和闻山老山《秋日忆旧》读老山钓鱼诗,想起我去年钓鱼的故事屈腿悬钩头带枝羡鱼情热向清池池边但见干涸鲋顺手一拈得意时垂钓,我不会.但救出嗷嗷待哺的鱼,也别有一番乐趣! 录老山闻山《秋日忆旧》秋日忆旧 / 闻山近晚蟾蜍上柳枝，迷离桃面映秋池。南方雨季悲风起，空望边城断雁时。次韵和闻山《秋日忆旧》/ 老山（一）长忆蓬头戴柳枝，狂摇小棹战秋池。如今无奈霜眉老，犹恋人生总角时。（二）正是金风抚桂枝，老来闲坐钓鱼池。壮年碌碌心思重，笑笑哈哈儿少时。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2008-11-28 13:44:43 Post subject:

儿时哈哈笑,壮年心思重,老来闲垂钓. 人生活脱写照! 景活情真! 妙!!! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

又一方天
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Posted: 2008-11-28 23:29:52 Post subject:

唱和俱佳 _________________ 空钩久垂钓得烟波月醉

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