非马
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Joined: 22 Jun 2006
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Location: 芝加哥
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 Posted: 2008-08-07 05:18:20 Post subject: 学鸟叫的人(汉/英) |
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学鸟叫的人
临出门的时候
尖著嘴的妻子
在他脸颊上
那么轻轻地
啄了一下
竟使这个已不年轻的
年轻人
一路尖著嘴
学鸟叫
惹得许多早衰的
翅膀
扑扑欲振
THE MAN WHO SINGS LIKE A BIRD
when he leaves home for work
his wife with puckered lips
pecks at his cheek with a light kiss
instantly the not-so-young man feels
young again
and puckers up his lips
whistling gaily
arousing many stale souls along the way
to beat their wings
in the hope of lifting like a bird
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Lake
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| Posted: 2008-08-07 11:29:18 Post subject: |
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很温馨浪漫。 有时候，一句话，一个动作就能影响一天的心情。
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William Zhou周道模
探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
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| Posted: 2008-08-09 04:06:56 Post subject: |
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最后三句，又来个“意译”的再创作，英语比汉语好。
在自己的夫人那里还有感觉，在这个时代还可以写诗了。
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非马
秀才
Joined: 22 Jun 2006
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Location: 芝加哥
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kino
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Joined: 23 Dec 2006
Posts: 411
Location: beijing
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| Posted: 2008-08-13 17:07:06 Post subject: |
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very interesting!  |
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曲元奇
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Joined: 01 Mar 2008
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Location: 山东
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| Posted: 2008-09-29 20:38:50 Post subject: |
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| 读了诗 我想到 人生 生命 生活 我想起了萨特的【艺术是召唤】 |
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