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生死之恋 之 静守一片温柔
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PostPosted: 2008-08-05 09:48:51    Post subject: 生死之恋 之 静守一片温柔 Reply with quote

不能再次对你说:"我爱你!"那会显得太轻飘了。然而,在临终前,我要留下遗言,感谢你曾走进我的生命,你是我这一生的风景, 我确定,我那么的爱过你!

题记____

一路走来,我们像是一对燕子,风雨兼程又离离和和,彼此把握着自己的翅膀,给每一次的碰撞和分离,都留下一分甜美的忧伤。

孤独的时候,你就是我的江南,挂在遥远的南方,而我,独自盘旋在想你的北方,送走了一个个日出日落,却不敢轻易的闯进你烟雨的江南。久了,你会剪一段小雨,在风的婉唱里,送我一幅江南水墨画。此时的我们,总能默契的相对,相视,相惜。将翅膀紧紧的绑在一起,并肩飞翔。。。。。

悄悄的,那种若即若离的飘渺像一座彩桥,稳固的横在你我之间。离人影远,在变化的季节面前,我多么的努力追赶,都无法跨越这道华美的彩桥。离人的翅膀也不再为我回旋。艰辛的一个人,肩负着皑雪的苍白。

走吧。在繁花的江南,有那样一个温婉的佳人会延续着我的爱,伴你老去。而我终于明白,你的笑容,才是我爱得真谛。。。

天若有情天亦老!借着风,再稍个口信儿吧,感谢你曾走进我的生命,你是我这一生的风景, 我确定,我那么的爱过你!



静守一片温柔

隐忍了,一季又一季的矜持
选在这个朗朗的清秋
轻轻打开自己
将月色一起,叠进
一朵茉莉花的
洁白

流水般的月光,温柔的滑过脚尖
弹响,一串串清脆的铃儿
双手合十,守在岸边
独自安抚自己
寂寞的
心跳

一寸一寸的思念,爬满心口处
那个最珍贵的名字,凝成一颗颗
潮湿的疼痛,从眼角跌落
叮叮咚咚,溅起
一湖清风的
晚唱

潮,渐渐退去。那个最珍贵的名字
歪歪斜斜,躺在花心里酣睡
收拾好心情转身,只带走一片
一双翩翩飞舞的彩翼
不小心抖落的
满地的
芬芳
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PostPosted: 2008-08-05 10:02:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

袖子姐你那个读领吧,写的那么好。俺先跟一个。。。。你尝尝味道先。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-05 12:55:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈~~~~

这里风景独好~~~
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PostPosted: 2008-08-05 13:02:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

红袖添乱 wrote:
哈哈~~~~

这里风景独好~~~


嗯,坏菜了。。。你说风景,俺想起,
立秋还得过几天呢。。。算啦。俺提前过吧。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-05 20:22:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

题记的一段‘’
【我们是一对燕子
风雨兼程又离离和和
彼此把握着自己的翅膀
给每一次的碰撞和分离
都留下一段甜美的忧伤】
这是诗啊真正的诗

诗的第二段‘’
【一寸寸的思念 爬满心口处
那个最珍贵的名字 凝成一颗颗
潮湿的疼痛 从眼角跌落
叮叮咚咚 溅起
一湖清风的
晚唱】
我不知道谁还能写的如此感人
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PostPosted: 2008-08-05 21:13:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

字字句句
诗含情



情合诗
真真切切
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PostPosted: 2008-08-06 17:05:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

连文字排列都顾及、清晰,一波波,好!
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PostPosted: 2008-08-07 06:29:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

温柔依旧
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PostPosted: 2008-08-07 12:06:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢曲兄点评,茉儿最会酸了,您慢慢会习惯。。。
有缘兄这个排版,,,好玩。。。要学着。。。。
谢谢诗盗夸奖,,,别说俺没提醒您,小心,别被水冲跑。。。
也谢谢悠子来坐坐。。。问好!

总之,谢谢诸位诗友,茉儿的这些小情小调小女人的娇气,,,
不登大雅。。。像点儿说的,太高了,空气都是稀薄地,,,想想,
还是不能飞,会缺氧。。哈哈,,,,
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