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Sleep well my child
Lake
举人


zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-01-09
tièzǐ: 1286

Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-05-20 09:00:13    fābiǎozhùtí: Sleep well my child yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

Sleep well my child
- A lament for a lost child in the earthquake

No, you were not like this before – lying there, breathless.
Never! Your shirt is wrinkled with dirt, your tangled hair
covering a smeared face that wears a painful frown.
A girl amiable to everyone in this little town,
now has fallen asleep too early too soon, even without
giving me a good-night hug, without, as usual, waiting
for me to tuck you up. I’ll not wake you up my child, but
gently I’ll clean your face with my tears, comb your hair
into a smooth ponytail and set the alarm clock for the dawn.
What’s in your dream? Homework? House chores?
Put them all aside for now because you are so tired.
Sleep well my child, sleep well in my arms…
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
fǎnyèshǒu
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钓月
秀才


zhùcèshíjiān: 2008-04-12
tièzǐ: 409
láizì: 中国江苏
钓月běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-05-24 05:46:59    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

Impressed!
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欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮

http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875
http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong
fǎnyèshǒu
yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào fāsòngsīrénliúyán fāsòngdiànzǐyóujiàn
Lake
举人


zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-01-09
tièzǐ: 1286

Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-05-25 18:54:04    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

谢谢。多批评。
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
fǎnyèshǒu
yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào fāsòngsīrénliúyán 博客
kino
秀才


zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-12-23
tièzǐ: 411
láizì: beijing
kinoběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-06-01 18:58:58    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

那些孩子最让人揪心 Sad
fǎnyèshǒu
yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào fāsòngsīrénliúyán fāsòngdiànzǐyóujiàn 博客 liúlǎnfābiǎozhědezhùyè
William Zhou周道模
探花


zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-06-10
tièzǐ: 3950
láizì: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-06-28 14:15:39    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

语流、语气、语感、语言有点像散文吧?
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模
fǎnyèshǒu
yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào fāsòngsīrénliúyán 博客 liúlǎnfābiǎozhědezhùyè
Lake
举人


zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-01-09
tièzǐ: 1286

Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-06-29 00:22:46    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

William Zhou周道模 xièdào:
语流、语气、语感、语言有点像散文吧?


谢谢。 是和我写的另外一首地震诗的风格不同。

有没有点像 lament?
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
fǎnyèshǒu
yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào fāsòngsīrénliúyán 博客
William Zhou周道模
探花


zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-06-10
tièzǐ: 3950
láizì: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-06-29 01:19:47    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

像流水一样的挽歌,学习了!
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模
fǎnyèshǒu
yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào fāsòngsīrénliúyán 博客 liúlǎnfābiǎozhědezhùyè
mahuairong
童生


zhùcèshíjiān: 2008-07-19
tièzǐ: 51
láizì: Qingdao China
mahuairongběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-07-22 06:43:21    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

马怀荣向你致敬!好诗!
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You see me, you lose me
fǎnyèshǒu
yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào fāsòngsīrénliúyán
Lake
举人


zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-01-09
tièzǐ: 1286

Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-07-22 10:13:19    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

I'm flattered And cursed!
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
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