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玉

一树摇风
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Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 37

一树摇风Collection

Posted: 2006-12-02 18:45:55 Post subject: 玉

石缝中喊出哥哥 泪珠里唤出妹妹  坐在祥云和鹰翅之上 翻阅旧日的神祗与王冠  抵达一小块儿干净的欲望 抵达可以触摸的美与忧伤  也可以破碎　镶在 无边的夜幕与深邃的眼神  也可以老去　隐入 一首温润如初的小诗　　　　　　　　　　　２００６.１２.２ _________________ 诗是诗人的绿卡／美是美人的护照

蓝桥
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 105

蓝桥Collection

Posted: 2006-12-03 06:48:23 Post subject:

凄美!

维鹿延
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
维鹿延Collection

Posted: 2006-12-03 09:40:22 Post subject:

玉是一托物，托物言情吧。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2006-12-03 18:41:24 Post subject:

也可以破碎　镶在 无边的夜幕与深邃的眼神  也可以老去　隐入 一首温润如初的小诗很喜欢这两节

左岸
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Joined: 12 Oct 2006
Posts: 215
Location: 中国大连
左岸Collection

Posted: 2006-12-04 04:58:11 Post subject:

也可以老去　隐入 一首温润如初的小诗隽永，玲珑剔透，心灵的铂片 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

了因大兄
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Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 209

了因大兄Collection

Posted: 2006-12-06 18:19:55 Post subject:

好玉，大彻大悟的玉。 _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

遛达的七七
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Joined: 07 Jun 2006
Posts: 329

遛达的七七Collection

Posted: 2006-12-07 21:10:51 Post subject: 这贴回得好

了因大兄 wrote:

好玉，大彻大悟的玉。

这回帖回得，这叫一个透彻！了因你悟的，要告诉我。

一树摇风
童生

Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 37

一树摇风Collection

Posted: 2006-12-08 04:22:18 Post subject:

同帖谢过蓝桥／维鹿延／月光／左岸／了因大兄／七小姐　诸诗友的评点～～～～～～ _________________ 诗是诗人的绿卡／美是美人的护照

左岸
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Joined: 12 Oct 2006
Posts: 215
Location: 中国大连
左岸Collection

Posted: 2006-12-14 04:46:42 Post subject:

再读有个性的诗！ _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

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