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<血浓雪白>

白水
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Posted: 2006-10-22 12:33:53 Post subject: <血浓雪白>

摄影: 和平岛摄影令人震撼, 临屏而作, 见笑 <血浓雪白> 惊弓? 金弓! 金色的弓箭朝着宇宙射出圣母玛利娅头上的光环我看见了十字和母亲清洗血的乌红用泪水, 用宽容, 用她铭心刻骨的爱与痛洗一片苍白是要还给人类的一个干净么? 犹大, 刽子手十字架, 还有渗骨的铁钉,,,,,,我等待着等待六月飞雪, 还世界一只纯洁的眼睛

赵福治
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Posted: 2006-10-23 05:41:59 Post subject:

血浓雪白——好图，好文，好题目。欣赏。

白水
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Posted: 2006-10-24 14:18:41 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

血浓雪白——好图，好文，好题目。欣赏。

谢谢了. 有时诗歌是在瞬间迸发出来的. 照片激发的灵感.

左岸
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Posted: 2006-11-02 00:53:03 Post subject:

诗画珠联璧合，大气，时空感强，文字修辞淡雅，典故运用使诗有了一种圣洁之叹。 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

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Posted: 2006-11-02 18:45:35 Post subject: 有气势

这一首写的很有气势

鹤雨
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Posted: 2006-11-03 02:49:12 Post subject: 好壮观的摄影作品，

诗歌配的大胆奇幻，丰富的想象，佩服！问好！ _________________ 愿意和大家共同进步!

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Posted: 2006-11-04 04:55:08 Post subject:

左岸, 迪拜, 鹤雨. 谢谢你们的鼓励, 也很喜欢你们的诗歌. 自我感觉这首诗歌前半部分还行, 结尾却不尽人意, 提出来与诗友交流. 自己将来有灵感时也会修改. 问好

白水
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Posted: 2006-11-13 05:16:22 Post subject:

改了一点: <血浓雪白> 惊弓? 金弓! 金色的弓箭朝着宇宙射出圣母玛利娅头上的光环我看见了十字和母亲清洗血的乌红用泪水, 用宽容, 用她铭心刻骨的爱与痛洗一片苍白是要给人类的一个干净么? 犹大, 刽子手十字架, 还有渗骨的铁钉,,,,,,我等待着等待六月飞雪, 还世界一只纯洁的眼睛

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-11-13 09:32:00 Post subject:

还世界一只纯洁的眼睛这个结束很不错 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

了因大兄
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Posted: 2006-11-18 20:14:19 Post subject:

想像奇特。问好。 _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

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Posted: 2006-11-29 18:41:13 Post subject:

[quote="和平岛"]还世界一只纯洁的眼睛这个结束很不错 [/quote] 谢谢, 改了

白水
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Posted: 2006-11-29 18:41:50 Post subject:

[quote="了因大兄"]想像奇特。问好。[/quote] 谢谢了因大兄. 问好

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