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Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

乳房

一树摇风
童生

Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 37

一树摇风Collection

Posted: 2006-11-20 20:44:27 Post subject: 乳房

童年 生活是狭小的 世界仅有乳房那么大  青年 生活是隆起的 每间乳房里都挤满了发芽的眼神  暮年 生活是平淡的 逻辑的楼台忽然随乳房一起坍塌  梦里 生活依然潮湿 一条乳河淌满了一生的泪水与甜蜜 _________________ 诗是诗人的绿卡／美是美人的护照

和平岛
举人

Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
和平岛Collection

Posted: 2006-11-20 22:18:23 Post subject:

一条乳河淌满了一生的泪水与甜蜜很经典的诗歌喜欢这句: 每间乳房里都挤满了发芽的眼神 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2006-11-21 01:24:41 Post subject:

生活哲理诗。生命与乳房的关系。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

了因大兄
秀才

Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 209

了因大兄Collection

Posted: 2006-11-21 01:41:57 Post subject:

寓意深远。问好。 _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

一树摇风
童生

Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 37

一树摇风Collection

Posted: 2006-11-21 05:10:21 Post subject:

同帖谢过和平岛／北方狼／了因大兄诸诗友～～～ _________________ 诗是诗人的绿卡／美是美人的护照

一树摇风
童生

Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 37

一树摇风Collection

Posted: 2006-11-21 05:11:02 Post subject:

同帖谢过和平岛／北方狼／了因大兄诸诗友～～～ _________________ 诗是诗人的绿卡／美是美人的护照

喧斓
童生

Joined: 03 Nov 2006
Posts: 2

喧斓Collection

Posted: 2006-11-21 07:05:57 Post subject:

形象生动乳房孕育着一个女人一个母亲的一生感动之极便是深刻的理解 _________________ 以笑的方式哭　在死亡的陪伴下活着

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2006-11-21 08:21:01 Post subject:

很不错的一首, 只是感觉暮年的描述不到位. 有时与老年人交谈, 发现他们有着更多的睿智和人生感叹

一树摇风
童生

Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 37

一树摇风Collection

Posted: 2006-11-21 16:58:33 Post subject:

问好楼上两位诗友！月光兄说的也不无道理，每个人都有自己不同的见解，摇风则侧重二者之间的＂神似＂。 _________________ 诗是诗人的绿卡／美是美人的护照

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