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举着收音机在顶楼上跳舞(组诗)
黎阳
童生


Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Posts: 56

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PostPosted: 2006-10-10 00:07:18    Post subject: 举着收音机在顶楼上跳舞(组诗) Reply with quote

举着收音机在顶楼上跳舞(组诗)


《 出售记忆的下午》

寻找 广州的巷道中
睡眠的旧物 我们曾经的
从新到旧 只是过程
不经意的民俗
从阴影里探出头来 撕咬我的下巴

复制麻木的两个小时记忆
回归的鞋子
在楼梯上讨价还价

我们整理了爱情以外的
东西 准备出售
两张木床一张桌子
却留下了唯一的枕头

收音机毫无厌倦的
拖延着时间
和我们最后依恋的一个频道


《老表》

十元、三十五元、五十元
一百、一百五、二百
这是老表最后的牌

我的过去就这样
交给了一双乌黑的手掌

再给我两个打火机

我已经把剩余的东西
全部给了你


老表在咬牙
我只好叹息
身影走了 满地的泥


老表没有满意
一口唾液又咽了回去

纸币上都是记忆
我走了 老表还在寻找
多余的收获

《举着收音机在顶楼上跳舞》

月亮没有来
星星还在
这样的夜晚
敞开胸怀 等待

风笛举起收音机
我抱着天外的旋律
顶楼上的呼吸
是广州最后的暖意

提起童心
在所有的目光里跳
最美的舞步
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2006-10-10 19:18:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

纸币上都是记忆
我走了 老表还在寻找
多余的收获 。。。握手兄弟。
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杯中冲浪
进士出身


Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2006-10-11 20:10:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一首感觉比较好,语言含着淡淡的哀愁。有些句子耐嚼,比如:不经意的民俗
从阴影里探出头来 撕咬我的下巴
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迪拜
同进士出身


Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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PostPosted: 2006-11-02 17:55:40    Post subject: 写的不错的现代诗 Reply with quote

写的不错的现代诗,

很有节奏感~~
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黎阳
童生


Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Posts: 56

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PostPosted: 2008-05-22 05:10:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

四五年了,光阴易老
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