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Sleep well my child
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PostPosted: 2008-05-20 09:00:13    Post subject: Sleep well my child Reply with quote

Sleep well my child
- A lament for a lost child in the earthquake

No, you were not like this before – lying there, breathless.
Never! Your shirt is wrinkled with dirt, your tangled hair
covering a smeared face that wears a painful frown.
A girl amiable to everyone in this little town,
now has fallen asleep too early too soon, even without
giving me a good-night hug, without, as usual, waiting
for me to tuck you up. I’ll not wake you up my child, but
gently I’ll clean your face with my tears, comb your hair
into a smooth ponytail and set the alarm clock for the dawn.
What’s in your dream? Homework? House chores?
Put them all aside for now because you are so tired.
Sleep well my child, sleep well in my arms…
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PostPosted: 2008-05-24 05:46:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

Impressed!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-25 18:54:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢。多批评。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-01 18:58:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

那些孩子最让人揪心 Sad
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PostPosted: 2008-06-28 14:15:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

语流、语气、语感、语言有点像散文吧?
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PostPosted: 2008-06-29 00:22:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
语流、语气、语感、语言有点像散文吧?


谢谢。 是和我写的另外一首地震诗的风格不同。

有没有点像 lament?
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PostPosted: 2008-06-29 01:19:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

像流水一样的挽歌,学习了!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-22 06:43:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

马怀荣向你致敬!好诗!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-22 10:13:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm flattered And cursed!
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