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【青豌豆】

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Posted: 2008-05-01 17:06:56 Post subject: 【青豌豆】

【青豌豆】 "蜂糖--"。女人的喊声如游丝轻飘飘,飞过阳台不见了金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思青豌豆的青是太阳给的豆荚壳的空是我给的而我心底的痛是谁给的? 一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚我挣脱了你青瓷盘装满泪珠我装满了谁? 金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思轻飘飘,转过阳台不见了女人的喊声如游丝。"蜂糖--" 有点像歌词

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Posted: 2008-05-01 19:51:42 Post subject:

我挣脱了你青瓷盘装满泪珠我装满了谁? ——好！ _________________ 安徽六安市裕安区政协王晓琴邮编：237000 伊妹儿：wangxiaoqin3@126.com 安徽琴子的BLOG http://blog.sina.com.cn/wxq3

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Posted: 2008-05-02 00:34:40 Post subject:

一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚我挣脱了你青瓷盘装满泪珠我装满了谁? ........喜欢第二和第三节.

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Posted: 2008-05-02 03:40:32 Post subject:

一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚我挣脱了你青瓷盘装满泪珠我装满了谁? _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2008-05-02 05:30:53 Post subject:

喜欢第三节.

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Posted: 2008-05-02 05:35:18 Post subject:

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王晓琴 wrote:

我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
——好！

晓琴节好～

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Posted: 2008-05-02 05:59:15 Post subject:

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一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
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问好福治兄弟～节好！

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Posted: 2008-05-02 06:19:43 Post subject:

很轻巧喜欢 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2008-05-02 06:37:38 Post subject:

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白水 Moonlight wrote:

喜欢第三节.

问白水妹妹节好，愉快～

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Posted: 2008-05-02 06:38:34 Post subject:

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很轻巧
喜欢

问岛节好，愉快～

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Posted: 2008-05-02 14:19:14 Post subject:

一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚我挣脱了你青瓷盘装满泪珠我装满了谁? 有韵味，拜读，学习！问节好！ _________________ 陪情感在哲理中流淌——

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Posted: 2008-05-02 16:55:02 Post subject:

有很宽的思考空间，欣赏。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2008-05-02 18:19:39 Post subject:

问好,谢评读，节好~

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Posted: 2008-05-02 18:20:51 Post subject:

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有很宽的思考空间，欣赏。

节好，谢兄评阅~

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Posted: 2008-05-02 22:03:21 Post subject:

青豌豆的青是太阳给的豆荚壳的空是我给的而我心底的痛是谁给的? 一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚我挣脱了你青瓷盘装满泪珠我装满了谁? 自然老到的写法! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-05-02 22:57:59 Post subject:

青豌豆的青是太阳给的豆荚壳的空是我给的而我心底的痛是谁给的?

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Posted: 2008-05-03 02:48:17 Post subject:

问好吉祥巫女～

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Posted: 2008-05-04 01:54:49 Post subject:

【青豌豆】 "蜂糖--"。女人的喊声如游丝轻飘飘,飞过阳台不见了金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思青豌豆的青是太阳给的豆荚壳的空是我给的而我心底的痛是谁给的? 一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚我挣脱了你青瓷盘装满泪珠我装满了谁? 金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思轻飘飘,转过阳台不见了女人的喊声如游丝。"蜂糖--" 喜欢这首的轻灵与情的痛切缠绕！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2008-05-04 19:07:00 Post subject:

谢谢山城子老师的评赏~祝好!

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Posted: 2008-05-05 00:55:08 Post subject:

问好钓月~

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