半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-01 17:06:56 Post subject: 【青豌豆】 |
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【青豌豆】
"蜂糖--"。女人的喊声如游丝
轻飘飘,飞过阳台不见了
金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思
青豌豆的青是太阳给的
豆荚壳的空是我给的
而我心底的痛是谁给的?
一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思
轻飘飘,转过阳台不见了
女人的喊声如游丝。"蜂糖--"
有点像歌词 |
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王晓琴 秀才
Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 132 Location: 安徽 王晓琴Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-01 19:51:42 Post subject: |
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我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
——好! _________________ 安徽六安市裕安区政协王晓琴
邮编:237000
伊妹儿:wangxiaoqin3@126.com
安徽琴子的BLOG
http://blog.sina.com.cn/wxq3 |
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赵福治 探花
Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-02 00:34:40 Post subject: |
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一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
........喜欢第二和第三节. |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-02 05:30:53 Post subject: |
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喜欢第三节. |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-02 05:35:18 Post subject: |
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王晓琴 wrote: |
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
——好! |
晓琴节好~ |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-02 05:59:15 Post subject: |
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问好福治兄弟~节好! |
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hepingdao Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2008-05-02 06:19:43 Post subject: |
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很轻巧
喜欢 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-02 06:37:38 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
喜欢第三节. |
问白水妹妹节好,愉快~ |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-02 06:38:34 Post subject: |
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问岛节好,愉快~ |
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丘河 秀才
Joined: 08 Apr 2008 Posts: 116 Location: 科尔沁vs庄周故里 丘河Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-02 14:19:14 Post subject: |
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一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
有韵味,拜读,学习!问节好! _________________ 陪情感在哲理中流淌—— |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-02 18:19:39 Post subject: |
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问好,谢评读,节好~ |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-02 18:20:51 Post subject: |
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节好,谢兄评阅~ |
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钓月 秀才
Joined: 12 Apr 2008 Posts: 409 Location: 中国江苏 钓月Collection |
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吉祥女巫 童生
Joined: 12 Nov 2007 Posts: 63 Location: 江苏连云港 吉祥女巫Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-02 22:57:59 Post subject: |
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青豌豆的青是太阳给的
豆荚壳的空是我给的
而我心底的痛是谁给的? |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-03 02:48:17 Post subject: |
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问好吉祥巫女~ |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-04 01:54:49 Post subject: |
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【青豌豆】
"蜂糖--"。女人的喊声如游丝
轻飘飘,飞过阳台不见了
金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思
青豌豆的青是太阳给的
豆荚壳的空是我给的
而我心底的痛是谁给的?
一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思
轻飘飘,转过阳台不见了
女人的喊声如游丝。"蜂糖--"
喜欢这首的轻灵与情的痛切缠绕! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-04 19:07:00 Post subject: |
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谢谢山城子老师的评赏~祝好! |
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-05 00:55:08 Post subject: |
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问好钓月~ |
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