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【青豌豆】
半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 17:06:56    Post subject: 【青豌豆】 Reply with quote

【青豌豆】

"蜂糖--"。女人的喊声如游丝
轻飘飘,飞过阳台不见了
金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思

青豌豆的青是太阳给的
豆荚壳的空是我给的
而我心底的痛是谁给的?

一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?

金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思
轻飘飘,转过阳台不见了
女人的喊声如游丝。"蜂糖--"


有点像歌词 Very Happy
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王晓琴
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 19:51:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
——好!
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 00:34:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
........喜欢第二和第三节.
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 03:40:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 05:30:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢第三节.
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 05:35:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

王晓琴 wrote:
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?
——好!


晓琴节好~
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 05:59:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
...


问好福治兄弟~节好!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 06:19:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

很轻巧
喜欢
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 06:37:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
喜欢第三节.


问白水妹妹节好,愉快~
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 06:38:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
很轻巧
喜欢



问岛节好,愉快~
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 14:19:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?

有韵味,拜读,学习!问节好!
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 16:55:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

有很宽的思考空间,欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 18:19:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好,谢评读,节好~
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 18:20:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
有很宽的思考空间,欣赏。


节好,谢兄评阅~
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 22:03:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

青豌豆的青是太阳给的
豆荚壳的空是我给的
而我心底的痛是谁给的?

一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?

自然老到的写法!
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 22:57:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

青豌豆的青是太阳给的
豆荚壳的空是我给的
而我心底的痛是谁给的?
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-03 02:48:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好吉祥巫女~
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PostPosted: 2008-05-04 01:54:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

【青豌豆】

"蜂糖--"。女人的喊声如游丝
轻飘飘,飞过阳台不见了
金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思

青豌豆的青是太阳给的
豆荚壳的空是我给的
而我心底的痛是谁给的?

一粒豌豆挣脱豆荚
我挣脱了你
青瓷盘装满泪珠
我装满了谁?

金灿灿地阳光,静悄悄地心思
轻飘飘,转过阳台不见了
女人的喊声如游丝。"蜂糖--"


喜欢这首的轻灵与情的痛切缠绕!
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-04 19:07:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢山城子老师的评赏~祝好!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-05 00:55:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好钓月~
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