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（独领风骚-仿波德莱尔风格）善良的这面

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Posted: 2008-03-18 00:43:23 Post subject: （独领风骚-仿波德莱尔风格）善良的这面

（独领风骚-仿波德莱尔风格）世界打开一本新书曲元奇主持善良的这面愿上天，恩赐于你需要怎样的安慰？朋友这天底下种种的慰藉任由你无限量的选择，朋友这源自于在最艰困的时刻在惊涛骇浪之中，你曾伸出援手愿上天恩赐于你，朋友再也没有人能理解，我心中的痛我将孤独的舔拭着众人艳羡的伤口此后，无时无刻要仔细的筛选出最忠心的狗，在狗群之中哪里会找的到，朋友午门外，届时应该让它万头钻动群众需要看到叛逆者，被斩首 2008/3/18那天0440 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-18 02:37:18 Post subject:

我将孤独的舔拭着众人艳羡的伤口此后，无时无刻要仔们细的筛选出最忠心的狗，在狗群之中哪里会找的到，朋友 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-03-18 03:41:42 Post subject:

喜欢读第二节！

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Posted: 2008-03-18 06:05:31 Post subject:

不错哦。问好！ _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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Posted: 2008-03-18 09:07:48 Post subject:

谢谢双和VS野兽！自己觉得写的很差，只是写了，就贴吧！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-18 16:25:36 Post subject:

哇。我也想写波德莱尔的。可惜你的这首不很地道过几天写几首跟你比比。哈哈。不过你的这首还是让我很吃惊~~ _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2008-03-18 19:24:36 Post subject:

曲元奇主持扑通

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Posted: 2008-03-19 00:47:02 Post subject:

诗盗兄说那首诗上独领风骚行吗?我说性

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Posted: 2008-03-19 03:15:33 Post subject:

不太懂波德莱尔的风格，不过感觉诗盗这首还不错～

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Posted: 2008-03-19 13:24:04 Post subject: 欺负人不是！写不好才比？

伤城 wrote:

哇。我也想写波德莱尔的。可惜你的这首不很地道 Very Happy

过几天写几首
...

本来想作成十四行，又想以现代笔触写古，又想。。。反正，想要的太多，什么都做不好。
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Posted: 2008-03-19 13:25:04 Post subject: 主持，不好？

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曲元奇主持

扑通

公主给个建议！
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Posted: 2008-03-19 13:27:40 Post subject: 恩。。。

曲元奇 wrote:

诗盗兄说那首诗上独领风骚行吗?我说性

落尘的置顶（读领风骚），是由作者自己决定，诗盗只检视有无同题的要件。
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Posted: 2008-03-19 13:30:11 Post subject: 谢谢安慰！

半溪明月 wrote:

不太懂波德莱尔的风格，不过感觉诗盗这首还不错～

谢明月版主选择安慰这个选项。
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Posted: 2008-03-19 17:00:00 Post subject:

还不错。

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Posted: 2008-03-19 21:58:28 Post subject:

波德来尔说诗的语言是炼金术和善的这面语言提炼的很好

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Posted: 2008-03-19 22:06:37 Post subject: 谢曲兄！

曲元奇 wrote:

波德来尔说诗的语言是炼金术和善的这面语言提炼的很好

觉得自己只有标提下的还不错尔！应该先学着您文字的编排、布置，再加入其他因素会好些。
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Posted: 2008-03-19 22:17:17 Post subject: 谢！

恩。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-20 05:43:27 Post subject:

有段时间狠狠喜欢着波德莱尔～～这首很有他的风格，喜欢了～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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