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《收集一些无聊的阳光》

张世明
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2008-03-03 03:17:31 Post subject: 《收集一些无聊的阳光》

现在阳光相当充足咋个花都花不完不如趁早把一些无聊的阳光暂时收集起来密封于窖池遗忘是最好的发酵也许一坛美酒就是这样被时间酿造出来的当有一天打开尘封的盖子那些曾经无聊的阳光便会迅速奔跑出来裹不住的浓香四溢瞬间照亮沧桑的古巷 2008.03.03

詩盜喜裸評
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Joined: 15 May 2007
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Posted: 2008-03-03 11:26:59 Post subject: 阳光最无聊！没事就跑出来晒太阳。

空的喔！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-03-03 16:35:45 Post subject:

遗忘是最好的发酵....有的句子很质感.

莞君
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Posted: 2008-03-03 22:01:45 Post subject:

喜欢后面问好 _________________ 莞君

张世明
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Posted: 2008-03-04 04:43:15 Post subject:

感谢各位阅读指正，问好/

陈亚伟
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Posted: 2008-03-04 20:46:16 Post subject:

感觉没深入呵呵

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-03-04 21:01:57 Post subject:

阳光根本不够用嘛,好想让每一个夜晚都充满阳光~ 酿造阳光,很诗意~

张世明
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Posted: 2008-03-05 06:03:37 Post subject: Re: 感觉没深入呵呵

陈亚伟 wrote:

感觉没深入呵呵

多谢。

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-03-05 06:25:44 Post subject:

遗忘是最好的发酵也许一坛美酒就是这样被时间酿造出来的喜欢这几句。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

灯台小老鼠
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Posted: 2008-03-05 07:27:58 Post subject:

收集一些无聊的阳光，提出一个能聊的诗题；渡过无数静寂的时光，渐渐结起网上的诗谊。

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