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《收集一些无聊的阳光》
张世明
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 03:17:31    Post subject: 《收集一些无聊的阳光》 Reply with quote

现在阳光相当充足
咋个花都花不完
不如趁早
把一些无聊的阳光
暂时收集起来
密封于窖池

遗忘是最好的发酵
也许一坛美酒
就是这样
被时间酿造出来的

当有一天
打开尘封的盖子
那些曾经无聊的阳光
便会迅速奔跑出来
裹不住的浓香四溢
瞬间照亮沧桑的古巷
2008.03.03
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 11:26:59    Post subject: 阳光最无聊!没事就跑出来晒太阳。 Reply with quote

空的喔!
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 16:35:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

遗忘是最好的发酵....有的句子很质感.
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莞君
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 22:01:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢后面 问好
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张世明
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 04:43:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢各位阅读指正,问好/
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陈亚伟
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 20:46:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

感觉没深入呵呵
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 21:01:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

阳光根本不够用嘛,好想让每一个夜晚都充满阳光~
酿造阳光,很诗意~
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张世明
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 06:03:37    Post subject: Re: 感觉没深入呵呵 Reply with quote

陈亚伟 wrote:
感觉没深入呵呵

多谢。
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游向高原的鱼
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 06:25:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

遗忘是最好的发酵
也许一坛美酒
就是这样
被时间酿造出来的

喜欢这几句。
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灯台小老鼠
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 07:27:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

收集一些无聊的阳光,
提出一个能聊的诗题;
渡过无数静寂的时光,
渐渐结起网上的诗谊。
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