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突然的雨（三首）

闽北阿秀
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Posted: 2008-01-24 01:56:40 Post subject: 突然的雨（三首）

《突然的雨》夜半雷声巨响突然断电，有人惊魂，彻底失去了睡眠我在房间里，不知道接着而来的大雨有没有贴着墙壁下此刻，看不见闪电，看不见陡坡看不见凸起的石头，看不见满溢的水，覆盖了那条路面，覆盖了这世界上印满的足迹更多看不见的事物，藏在黑暗里湿淋淋《依然快乐》门打开的瞬间一缕阳光照在白墙上，不需仰视，非常显目这是新的一天，久雨后的早晨走出家门，我听到了脚步声和身后清脆的上锁声但我可以保证，绝对没有听到传说中的阳光的声音《古民居》只转一个弯就来到你面前，你似乎刚醒来，惺忪的眼睛，似睁似闭一袭古旧的灰色长裳，几块补丁，倒也干净天井边，一线天空，漏下几丝阳光石板上水迹未干，墙角薄薄的苔藓，还有几点绿意雕窗后面，看不到村姑偷窥的身影房门洞开，我却找不到交谈的人转身后，看到一位老汉背着手，慢悠悠地踩着鹅卵石沿着狭长的小巷，远我而去

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-24 07:44:29 Post subject:

夜半雷声巨响！突然断电有人惊魂！彻底失去了睡眠仅供闽北阿秀参考。马祖好像说得闽北话。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-01-25 06:17:33 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

夜半雷声巨响！突然断电
...

不明白你的意思，我笨

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Posted: 2008-01-25 07:12:49 Post subject:

依然快乐》门打开的瞬间一缕阳光照在白墙上，不需仰视，非常显目这是新的一天，久雨后的早晨走出家门，我听到了脚步声和身后清脆的上锁声但我可以保证，绝对没有听到传说中的阳光的声音 ——最喜欢！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2008-01-25 08:48:30 Post subject:

闽北阿秀 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

夜半雷声巨响！突然断电
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不明白你的意思，我笨

没办法让您明白，可以见得我比您更笨！组个笨笨二人组好了。
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可情可理，去捧就真

韩少君
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Posted: 2008-01-25 19:06:28 Post subject:

很有意境! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-01-25 19:30:25 Post subject:

一三首很喜欢，阿秀是景物描写的高手,学习~

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Posted: 2008-01-25 21:02:25 Post subject:

房门洞开，我却找不到交谈的人转身后，看到一位老汉背着手，慢悠悠地踩着鹅卵石沿着狭长的小巷，远我而去 ----宁静的孤独! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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