莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-03 17:37:26 Post subject: 点绛唇—晨起有感 |
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独向幽窗,喜忧参半韶华溜。
严冬未瘦,期盼梅新秀。
谁奏清音?巧把诗魂就。
时光走,可看回首,总被寒沁透。 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-03 22:28:31 Post subject: |
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总被寒沁透——喜欢这一句! |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2008-01-04 10:16:49 Post subject: |
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"谁奏清音?巧把诗魂就。"也很好啊! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-04 12:28:23 Post subject: |
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谢谢点评! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-04 12:29:41 Post subject: |
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谢谢暗香姐! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-04 12:30:59 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
"谁奏清音?巧把诗魂就。"也很好啊! |
谢谢GG点评! |
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