| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都
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				|  Posted: 2008-01-03 17:37:26    Post subject: 点绛唇—晨起有感 |   |  
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 独向幽窗,喜忧参半韶华溜。
 严冬未瘦,期盼梅新秀。
 
 谁奏清音?巧把诗魂就。
 时光走,可看回首,总被寒沁透。
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		| 荷梦 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 19 Dec 2006
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 Location: 湖北,黄梅
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				|  Posted: 2008-01-03 22:28:31    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 总被寒沁透——喜欢这一句! |  | 
	
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		| 暗香如沁 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 14 Jan 2007
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 Location: 北京
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-01-04 10:16:49    Post subject: |   |  
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				| "谁奏清音?巧把诗魂就。"也很好啊! |  | 
	
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-01-04 12:28:23    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢点评! |  | 
	
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-01-04 12:29:41    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢暗香姐! |  | 
	
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-01-04 12:30:59    Post subject: |   |  
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谢谢GG点评! 
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