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《一只停在荷梗上的红蜻蜓》(二首)
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PostPosted: 2007-12-22 17:18:29    Post subject: 《一只停在荷梗上的红蜻蜓》(二首) Reply with quote

《一只停在荷梗上的红蜻蜓》(二首)

田 斌

一只停在荷梗上的红蜻蜓
秋风中仍翕动着单薄的翅膀
孤独的身影
是否在把往事怀想
心头是否还萦绕着倩影的暗香

这情景 触动了我不尽的忧伤
人物一念 草木一春
只有时间的脚步不停向前
苍老了岁月与容颜

爱神啊 请你告诉我
为什么有时候
我们总爱沉迷在一段旧梦里
不愿醒来


《阳台上的迎春花》

高悬的阳台上
一枝迎春花露出的星星的黄
鲜亮了我的目光
这微弱的花朵 怎么有那么鲜艳
仿佛要把这个城市灰色的冬天涂染
料峭的风里 她展露的容颜
把一扇扇紧闭的窗口打开
这让我有些兴奋
心头不觉涌动出初恋的情怀
她挥动纤弱而细长的手
热烈而挚着地喊
春来了 春来了
掏出心中满腔的爱
这时 我仿佛看见
桃花开了 梨花开了
花海中红衣少女舞动的春风
吹出了春的温暖与绚烂
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PostPosted: 2007-12-22 18:25:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

热情可鉴。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-22 21:39:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

情感很好
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PostPosted: 2007-12-23 02:23:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

《阳台上的迎春花》

高悬的阳台上
一枝迎春花露出的星星的黄
鲜亮了我的目光
这微弱的花朵 怎么有那么鲜艳
仿佛要把这个城市灰色的冬天涂染
料峭的风里 她展露的容颜
把一扇扇紧闭的窗口打开
这让我有些兴奋
心头不觉涌动出初恋的情怀
她挥动纤弱而细长的手
热烈而挚着地喊
春来了 春来了
掏出心中满腔的爱
这时 我仿佛看见
桃花开了 梨花开了
花海中红衣少女舞动的春风
吹出了春的温暖与绚烂

透出暖意,欣赏。
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-12-23 03:19:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢后一首!!!问候诗人!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 10:24:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏好诗 问好
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