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I expect(原创双语小诗)
钓月
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zhùcèshíjiān: 2008-04-12
tièzǐ: 409
láizì: 中国江苏
钓月běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-05-31 05:35:04    fābiǎozhùtí: I expect(原创双语小诗) yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

I expect peace——
A bright mirror
To reflect my heart
And look at her figure

I expect love——
A dense forest in the burning sun
To taste the red apples
And talk of touching love

I expect adventures——
The soul of the seas
To stir up billows and chase after
The seagulls and floating clouds

I expect imagination--
The pigeon whistles in blue sky
To awaken the humdrum dream
And send me grains of poetry

我企望

我企望安宁——
壁上之明镜
照一照我的心
看一看她的倩影

我企望爱情——
烈日下之密林
尝尝红红的苹果
道道缠绵的恋情

我企望冒险——
大海之魂灵
掀滔天大浪
追逐海鸥浮云

我企望想象--
蓝天鸽哨音
唤醒平乏的梦
遗我粒粒诗韵
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kino
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kinoběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-06-01 18:18:15    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

汉语中的并列,省略,直译为英文在逻辑上存在问题。
fǎnyèshǒu
yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào fāsòngsīrénliúyán fāsòngdiànzǐyóujiàn 博客 liúlǎnfābiǎozhědezhùyè
钓月
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zhùcèshíjiān: 2008-04-12
tièzǐ: 409
láizì: 中国江苏
钓月běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-06-03 23:06:22    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

谢谢! I'mthinking how to change.
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欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮

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fǎnyèshǒu
yuèlǎnchéngyuánzīliào fāsòngsīrénliúyán fāsòngdiànzǐyóujiàn
William Zhou周道模
探花


zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-06-10
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láizì: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-06-28 14:20:06    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

第一段第四句似乎可以这样:

I look at her figure in the mirror
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模
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cóngyǐqiándetièzǐkāishǐxiǎnshì:   
biǎoqíngtúàn
Very Happy Smile Sad Surprised
Shocked Confused Cool Laughing
Mad Razz Embarassed Crying or Very sad
Evil or Very Mad Twisted Evil Rolling Eyes Wink
Exclamation Question Idea Arrow
gèngduōbiǎoqíngtúàn
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