暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-18 19:36:07 Post subject: 西江月.感二首 |
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借得春风词笔,邀来梦海波涛。闲情一卷漫招摇,何惧他人言笑。 成败无关荣辱,是非岂落清高。但教写意渡朝朝,看个鸡鸣狗跳。
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深涧残花相送,长桥薄雾还迎。一帘勾月惹伶仃,道是天涯人静。 莫问销魂几度?须知触景堪惊。飘萍之路见狰狞,磨了多情心性。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~ |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-18 20:12:23 Post subject: |
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标致 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-18 22:02:03 Post subject: |
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别致。 |
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楚人 童生
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 63 Location: 中国大陆 楚人Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-19 18:32:38 Post subject: |
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1如司马大军,2似诸葛家丁,楼上风景可好?一旁观者心惊! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2007-12-19 19:28:37 Post subject: |
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风格确和暗香以往的不同。 |
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戴玨 秀才

Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 808
戴玨Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-22 15:04:02 Post subject: |
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較喜其二。 _________________ I labour by singing light
我的blog
我的專欄 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-27 05:46:03 Post subject: |
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高境界啊, 学习了.
借得 邀来 岂落 鸡鸣狗跳 动词助动词用得惟妙惟肖。喜欢! |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-27 11:58:15 Post subject: |
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"成败无关荣辱,是非岂落请高"
何等旷达的胸怀!问好暗香. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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