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西江月.感二首
暗香如沁
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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 19:36:07    Post subject: 西江月.感二首 Reply with quote

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借得春风词笔,邀来梦海波涛。闲情一卷漫招摇,何惧他人言笑。 成败无关荣辱,是非岂落清高。但教写意渡朝朝,看个鸡鸣狗跳。

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深涧残花相送,长桥薄雾还迎。一帘勾月惹伶仃,道是天涯人静。 莫问销魂几度?须知触景堪惊。飘萍之路见狰狞,磨了多情心性。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 20:12:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-12-18 22:02:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

别致。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 18:32:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

1如司马大军,2似诸葛家丁,楼上风景可好?一旁观者心惊!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 19:28:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

风格确和暗香以往的不同。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-22 15:04:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

較喜其二。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 03:48:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢支持
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 05:46:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

高境界啊, 学习了.

借得 邀来 岂落 鸡鸣狗跳 动词助动词用得惟妙惟肖。喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 11:56:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师鼓励。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 11:58:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

"成败无关荣辱,是非岂落请高"
何等旷达的胸怀!问好暗香.
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 12:03:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师评阅.
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