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西江月．感二首

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-12-18 19:36:07 Post subject: 西江月．感二首

1 借得春风词笔，邀来梦海波涛。闲情一卷漫招摇，何惧他人言笑。成败无关荣辱，是非岂落清高。但教写意渡朝朝，看个鸡鸣狗跳。 2 深涧残花相送，长桥薄雾还迎。一帘勾月惹伶仃，道是天涯人静。莫问销魂几度？须知触景堪惊。飘萍之路见狰狞，磨了多情心性。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-12-18 20:12:23 Post subject:

标致 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-12-18 22:02:03 Post subject:

别致。

楚人
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Posted: 2007-12-19 18:32:38 Post subject:

1如司马大军,2似诸葛家丁,楼上风景可好?一旁观者心惊!

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Posted: 2007-12-19 19:28:37 Post subject:

风格确和暗香以往的不同。

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Posted: 2007-12-22 15:04:02 Post subject:

較喜其二。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-12-27 03:48:12 Post subject:

感谢支持 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-12-27 05:46:03 Post subject:

高境界啊, 学习了. 借得邀来岂落鸡鸣狗跳动词助动词用得惟妙惟肖。喜欢!

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-12-27 11:56:49 Post subject:

谢谢老师鼓励。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-12-27 11:58:15 Post subject:

"成败无关荣辱,是非岂落请高" 何等旷达的胸怀!问好暗香. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-12-27 12:03:26 Post subject:

谢谢老师评阅． _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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